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k ... but u missed out on the aim convo we had... he was tryin to pull a race card on me...
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Voted For: Socrates
Socrates- nice punches.....the wording was great..... the beggining was great ending was ok..........1st, 2nd, 3rd bars were fukin dope man..... Saaran-bleh ok verse overall...word ya pucnhes a lil better.............not much...sorry |
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best line was ya closer.. shit i can find 3 different types of wordplays on that one... that was a dope punch....
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Voted For: Socrates
Saaran Claim ya runnin rv in text witcha vet status you forget my text is rabid... love to see how ass ya audio is... thats if you had it Nah...weak opener, no diss. I'ma whiteboi squeaky voice, i know it, cuz y'all seen this Quit fuckin wit rv stick to penis... diss how i'm white when ya name yaself afta a caucasion genius LMAO!..errr, nah! no terms for played words, slowly killed ya cuz ya heard my sins not bad 8 losses...had that by the time i had thirty wins nope...thats self glorify Glad you quit battlin, your verse more from a corny guy Shit yo ass came back to rv to up your porn supply best bar^still weak...links are played Socrates I hate this fuckin pussy, cuz damn hes not at my level So imma torch his shit like he sat on a toilet for the devil nice...no punch but nice meta Saaran imma use you name against you, wrap you ho Cuz fuck im on a mission, and youre still in a pueblo decent Ill hit you below the belt, so when i aimed way down south I swung and hit lips, and im NOT saying i hit you in the mouth LMFAO..haha...dope bar right there Fuck hes a whack everything. although he tries to fake it Rhymes his softer than a pillow,so he should take his verse and blanket yeah i get the concept..coulda bin worded better. Im smashing you head in sliding glass doors, fuckin nympho So ill show you to the door for your loss, and take the win-dow lol...nice closer Imma give this to soc. saaran ya didn't really have any punches in here. this would of worked better if it was audio. soc just had harder punches and better wordplay, metas ect. the mouth punch was dope that def clinched the battle fo ya. v/ Soc rtf and drop an honest vote on this battle http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=157553 |
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Just checkin the polls............................1
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not good, ahh.... not good.
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Voted For: Socrates
this battle was pretty dope i expected a little more from saraan but his verse was good... i dont like the structure... no matter how you use that structure it still makes your lines stretched... couple OK punches but nothing too great... but... Fuck hes a whack everything. although he tries to fake it Rhymes his softer than a pillow,so he should take his verse and blanket this bar from soc was just dope... best in the battle and he stayed consistent with the disses... pretty good verse from you |
dig dat^^? word, lets finish this little thang off
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Voted For: Socrates
Claim ya runnin rv in text witcha vet status you forget my text is rabid... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD PUNCH PLUS NOT AN GOOD OPENER love to see how ass ya audio is... thats if you had it I'ma whiteboi squeaky voice, i know it, cuz y'all seen this ^^^^^^^^^^"ERM" ELEVATE ON PUNCHES FLOW TOOK OVA THIS PART BUT DA PUNCHES COMPLETLY WACK MAYNE Quit fuckin wit rv stick to penis... diss how i'm white when ya name yaself afta a caucasion genius ^^^^^^^^^^^ BAD PUNCH NOT HARD HITTIN AND NOT AN GOOD STRUTURE no terms for played words, slowly killed ya cuz ya heard my sins not bad 8 losses...had that by the time i had thirty wins ^^^^^^^^^^^^ "EH" NOT AN GOOD PUNCH Glad you quit battlin, your verse more from a corny guy Shit yo ass came back to rv to up your porn supply ^^^^^^^^^ O OK THAT WAS AN OK PUNCH BUT STILL CHA VERSE WAS PLAYED OUT SARRAN- U HAD AN WEAK VERSE DEM PUNCHES WERENT HARD HITTIN AND PLUS CHA FLOW WAS CHOPPED UP IN SOME PLACES , BUT EITHER WAY DIS WAS AN WACK VERSE NO HARD HITTIN PUNCHES AND NO FLOW PLUS NO PERSONALS I hate this fuckin pussy, cuz damn hes not at my level So imma torch his shit like he sat on a toilet for the devil Saaran imma use you name against you, wrap you ho Cuz fuck im on a mission, and youre still in a pueblo ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ O AIIIIIIIGHT "OK" PUNCH COULD'VE BEEN BETTA BUT GOOD FLOW MAYNE Ill hit you below the belt, so when i aimed way down south I swung and hit lips, and im NOT saying i hit you in the mouth Fuck hes a whack everything. although he tries to fake it Rhymes his softer than a pillow,so he should take his verse and blanket Im smashing you head in sliding glass doors, fuckin nympho So ill show you to the door for your loss, and take the win-dow ^^^^^^^^^^^ "EH" OK PUNCHES NICE FLOW SOCRATES- AIIIGHT MAYNE ELEVATE ON PUNCHES I MEAN SERIOUSLY BOTH OF U NEED TO ELEVATE ON PUNCHES OVERALL=THIS WAS AN WACK BATTLE, LOOK LIKE AN NEWB ONE, OK SARRAN- U DIDNT HAD NO PUNCHES NOT HARD HITTIN ONES AND FLOW WAS CHOPPED UP IN SOME PLACES ELEVATE ON THAT OK SOCRATES- U HAD FLOW BUT DA PUNCHES WERENT HARD HITTIN ATLEAST U HAD PUNCHES V-SOCRATES- FOR HAVING PUNCHES AND HARDER ONES TOO BASICALLY- SARRAN U CAME TOO BASIC, |
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