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Check in by: 10-27-04 at 10:04 AM

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enygma has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-27-04 09:54 AM.

Verbal Phenom has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-27-04 09:55 AM.

This cat's easily trash........enough to overflow a land fill
But Verb keeps words in motion....while his verse is still a stand still
This cat bringing fire?.....Well I guess he's got sterno
Kid, I'll knock your fucking lights out and have you going nocturnal
I'm probably the oldest on this site... ya still need to have protection
Cause I'll shove my cane up your ass and give you a staff infection
I'm miles ahead.....how dare you try to come spit em with me
I mean shit......he writes in small text cause he's got little to see
It's over, nighty night.....guess it's time to check out ya whore
Can't beat me straight up.....so he tried to make it best out of four

Voted For: enygma

i give this too enyhma

enygma: you still got it..this was a decent verse from you..you got that Godly like structure in your lines..this shit was nice..best line

This cat bringing fire?.....Well I guess he's got sterno
Kid, I'll knock your fucking lights out and have you going nocturnal

that was dope...lol nyce shit your punches hit em hard..personals ..there was none..your structure was decent..flow was good...wordplay was DOPE....vocab...ok....consistancy...good

verbal: this shit was Dope too...thing is your punches didnt hit as hard as Engyma's ....your personals..there was none...your shti was ok too

Honestly, this isn't tha life to suitya, take up trombone n get a tutor
Kids perverted, he think that playin wit big guns is playtime at hooters


best line ^ and that was..blah...ok

wordplay..not good..structure..good..flow good....vocab...ok...overall this was a decent verse.........but enygma gets my vote

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Voted For: enygma


Im doing break down....
Verbal
U thinking ur a 'step' a'head' is funny, u a joke, i stomp on skulls for a living
None of ya punches r hitting, u blaze a page...readin ma verse 'n' skimming
No… not good of an opening wasn’t feeling it…
I be the reaper, watch as u try and inhale words of fury, take a breather
I'll take out ya speaker, To light up ya life, take rv 'n' spark up the heater
This is more of a slef glori.. so no..
You bin here for awhile, but u aint even a vet, more like you were new
In this battle, you should already be dead, like the inactivity of ya crew
This was iight I gues.. didn’t like the concept
Honestly, this isn't tha life to suitya, take up trombone n get a tutor
Kids perverted, he think that playin wit big guns is playtime at hooters
No… hell no… not good…
Think u a star?, I'm godly wit infinite forms of rap, so u overlooking clouds
Don't shout ur verse isn't a big deal, Like tryna find a birthday party clown
Not good closer

Your verse was very weak.. shit.. what happened yo… this is gotta be the worst ive seen from you.. I mean.. the verse you had at writersblock was better.. man…. Not good…



Nygma
This cat's easily trash........enough to overflow a land fill
But Verb keeps words in motion....while his verse is still a stand still
Nice opening.. thought a lil rewording could be done
This cat bringing fire?.....Well I guess he's got sterno
Kid, I'll knock your fucking lights out and have you going nocturnal
Not good flow on this… not good concept
I'm probably the oldest on this site... ya still need to have protection
Cause I'll shove my cane up your ass and give you a staff infection
No… not good..
I'm miles ahead.....how dare you try to come spit em with me
I mean shit......he writes in small text cause he's got little to see
This was iight… the concept was I lil played
It's over, nighty night.....guess it's time to check out ya whore
Can't beat me straight up.....so he tried to make it best out of four
Ok closer …

Noty feeling any of your verses… not good punches at all.. infact…there was barely any direct punches…
Vote: nygma for a betteer verse….

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