damn yall cool, upin............................................

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Checking Tha Polls Here Lets See This Good Drop Kid

Voted For: oreo

exclusive your vese looked like u tried to hard......

and still it sucked....u just dont have any good shit.....

oreo's wasnt that much betta.......but he didnt have to try hard in this one............

he gits it for betta every thing.......

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Voted For: oreo

close and looked forward to battle

punches- oreo becuz u had more and harder hittin
personals- oreo u had more
multis- neither
metas- oreo just overall better
flow- X
structure- X
word play- tie
humor- oreo

oreo nice drop. good punches and metas, i guess just keep elevatin cuz i cant find anythin wrong.

X man your wordin wuz messed up and half your verse is self glorifyin.

No hate just an honest voter. v/oreo

pz

Voted For: ...Xclusive...

aalright both had personals but oreos were pretty played so i give u personals
flow oreo but thats cause his vocab sucked lol so flow oreo
vocab xclusive oreo came really basic nothin special
overall im givin it to x because his personals were funny his complexity was good flow was ok i think u won bcaus oreo doubted u and came wack dont ever come wack it might hurt u and i think thats what happened here so goood job to both but i gott give it to lil x

Voted For: oreo

oreo won this battle barely bcuz it was not that great at all.
but Xclusive just sounded like he was crying the whole verse to b blunt. Orea had the better punches even tho his flow was pretty simple. work on creativity of punches both of u to spice up ya verse. holla at ya boy

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upin.............................................. .....

Voted For: oreo

Vote-Oreo

Oreo Got My Vote Kid Came Pretty Slick Good Lyricsl Tha Flow Was Cool I Was Feeling It His Vocab Was Tight Good Shit Decent Structure Over All 8-10


...Xclusive...
Pretty Good Flow Kid Decent Structure Some Good Personals Came Out Pretty Hard Good Started Ya Flow Was Cool Nice Drop Over All 6/7-10

Big Ups To Both Yall One

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Voted For: ...Xclusive...

Jea Xclusive got this easily..oreo shit was too basic

xclusive...see wat im sayin u elevated quickly ur punches are way doper..and u had crazy structuer...ur flow was nyce aswelll....wordplay was theer.......ur vocab was pretty nyce u just straight merked him

oreo: ur shit was aiight but too basic u need to make ur punches hit alot harder if they are gonna be that short u naww wat im sayin...but ur shit was straight..vocab...was bad....structure was ok and flow was good..

vote X

uppoin............................. quit d'qin every vote i get

Voted For: ...Xclusive...

here's the breakdown...

Oreo

yo man..your rhyme scheme was really basic..
though I see youre elevated..it wasn't enough
for Xclusive..like it was like a freestyle..with
writer's bock man..I aint hatin cuz we coo..
elevate some more

Xclusive

your punches were pretty good
and the closer was funny..made me laugh..
and I never laugh...EVER..flow was good
and structure was about between iight and good..
so you win for an overall better verse

Voted For: ...Xclusive...

Xclusive-You rap pretty good for a 14 year old Canadian lol...anyways....decent structure with a nice flow...good job opening with a personal....not to many decent punches or wordplayand your vocab was weak...but overall nice drop

oreo-a good structure and flow...but all your shit was basic...couple of good wordplay there....no real good punches or personals..vocab was also weak

V/Xclusive
reason:felt he was more consistent and hit harder...better personals

return teh favor in my sig or against RapGod...honest votes only thanks

Voted For: ...Xclusive...


Good battle:

Punches: Xclu
Personals: xclu
Complexity: xclu
Flow: tie
Structure: tie
Vote: xclu

Xclu had a more plished verse...oreo's verse didn't really have any punches just a bunch of played concepts..no hate but elevate

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