Battle Rules:

6-10
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/r, i know you do it
Accept and its due tomorrow at noon 12 to be exact

dont decline you bitch or i will bunk this shit in my sig...

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-01-04 at 08:56 PM

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DQ'ed for asking for votes:

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Originally Posted by oreo get at mine, its in the top of front lines ith exclusive yo, if you dont ill get you banned, but much love homie

you gonna accept? dont be a bitch cuz you will be shown in open mic and in my audio anyway

oreo has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-29-04 10:11 PM.

...Xclusive... has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-29-04 10:13 PM.

You talk to much for a moist cookie dipped in a ‘glass’ of milk…
My punches run smooth over you like the ‘fabric’ called silk…
You think to much of being older in age makes you better…
What the fuck your getting nervous sweating in a warm sweater…
You ducked me the first time so you ‘stalled’ for time to pre-write…
‘Stop’ fingering up your beef curtains…damn that shit isn’t right…
I don’t care if you like running your ‘tongue’ up a line of sweaty shit…
That makes my sick to the ‘stomach’ to hear you also like to quit…
He thinks when hes named after a “cookie” and from Cincinnati…
That he can roll wit style but naw hes a fried ‘biscuit’ eating fatty…

your a cocky lil bitch, why you wanna battle me so bad, caint find a newb to beat?

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naw...i wanna shut your cocky ass up how am i cocky that dont make sense i dotn brag about shit...and yell o look a elevated cough cough you...hurry up and spit fag...

i can geta pettion on here to claim you lame
only thing exclusive about you kid is your name
you dont have enough vocab to not say cookie,
im sicker than you, but i still won't play hookie,
14 and your still throwing temper tantrums,
couldnt spit fire if you were a jack-o-lanturn,
crushing your dream like rotting for the yankies,
after this battle youll need a lyrical hankie pankie,
you a broke ass bitch, look at your account {$25}
a viagra couldn't even raise your D/R counts

and all the girlies say your prettyw fly for a white guy?
look at your pic=LOSER

ok you can shut your mouth now...you had no punches only personals thats not a punches ok uppin...

o and im not broke i have 20000 look you'll see..uppin

uppin...................your bank gots 25, that why i said acount, dikhead

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wtf...your the dickhead i got 23088 read loser...uppin

Voted For: oreo

lol id have to go with oreo on this....even though i didnt appreciate the yankee line....

punches: oreo had better punches...both were decent...but xclusive...i just felt like some of the lines were a bit wack and u could have done a lot better

multis: oreo had a lot more....xclusive u didnt really have any multis in your verse

structure: both were pretty good

flow: oreo yours flowed pretty good...maybe a couple parts that didnt flow too great......xclusive....yours flowed pretty good too...but i kinda thought some of your lines were a bit stretched....just my opinion

NO HATE AT ALL......JUST MY OPINION

return the favor w/ my battles vs. destiny a king dipset.

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Voted For: oreo

damn oreo..good punches and personals...oreo won...but i'm not votin

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