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[FONT=Comic Sans MS]9th Degree, d/r like whoa and i have proof to show to strobe too, to elusiv g, no i did not go over the limit, the middle line is tolerated u dick, i'm gonna get this moved to efl since herbs like elusiv g don't no how to vote and to 9th degree the opener was a personal and the mom line was a personal cause she is dead so suck ass, uppin for honest explained non d/r votes
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Banks lines are so fucking played and u people didn't notice all of his lines from the last, uppin for honest explained votes
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lol^ I didn't even use a banks punch. wow. uppin' this....................................
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Voted For: SPuL
Dent, I Fucking Hate Your Structure... But I Did Like Your Verse Better... Even If Your Lines Were Streched Like None Other... Aiight Heres The Breakdown... Punches:Tie Wordplay: Dent Flow: Spul Structure: Spul Opener: Spul Closer: Dent I Actually Liked Dents Verse Better... But When I Weighed Out All The Criteria Spul Took This... Even Though I Wasnt Really Feelin His Ish... .One. |
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Voted For: SPuL
spul gets this for better structure easier flow harder punches better metas better wordplay Identical ya punches didnt really stick out 2 me ya wordplay was ok and ya structure seemed like it was all over the place ya flow wasent on point at all ..it was all choppy u need 2 come a lil bit more consistent this goes 2 spul for better structure punches Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
ok people soc uses the same damn structure just a different font but the minute i do the same structure as him ya'll motherfuckers act like it's new, uppin for honest explained non d/r votes
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Voted For: SPuL
vote SPuL.. pretty much its like this.. didnt even have to read the battle cause identikal's lines were so longs.. structure was fucked and flow was way off... SPuL good battle.. no more corny ass punches.. these were pretyt good.. nice wordplay.. weerd.. ur starting to look like old spul again.. u win this because of punches structure and flow.. no personals really from either.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: SPuL
identikal: it's no shock kid is fraud, inherited terrorist genes so he's the type to carry bombs if ghostwriters are rv's version of steroids then u've been exposed like barry bonds ^^good meta but thats it 6/10 dml...? now i guess when it comes to online relationships u seem to be the better man child fame...naw, spul seems to be the result of his father getting raped at neverland ^^lmao funny but played concept 5/10 kid has got no life, stays on rv when he's bored, it even shows in his thread names came out the closet, he even admitted to having dsl,.... .................................................. ...now wonder why he likes to perform headgames ^^wack 4/10 u was all excited and geeked, pm'ing me on AIM just to tell me about ya chat bot ya not wanted here, ya pops should've have just left u... ............................................as a stain by his playboy magazine and his crack pot ^^stretched as fuck 3/10 said ya got banned for biting a quote...well god damn i guess u still ain't learned no fucking...clinic fertilization, we all know that u was born from an inmates sperm ^^wack 4/10 i remember her well, ya mom was the only woman i knew that could give head long but i guess if i were to go to her grave site... .................................................a nd piss on her tombstone i would be dead wrong ^^ehh decent 5/10 i'm about ready to fuck this bitch, flavored condoms, someone hand me a tan rubber ok now let's see, kyrogenix, latinkitten,... .......................i guess for future ghostwritings spul could just ask his grandmother ^^ehh good personal wack set up 5/10 overall : 32/70 (46%) SPuL: Say DQ wins are wack, you shouldn’t keep them on the shelf I should call you John Kerry, cuz you contradict yourself ^^dope meta decent opener 7/10 I'll have yo head spinnin' like wheels on bicycle Change yo name again, but the result will be indentikaL ^^decent personal 5/10 My rhymes are cerebral, hit you wit ‘em, say "you’re mental" And I’ll beat you wit no words, like you was an instrumental ^^dopest bar of this battle 9/10 The guards lift you off, and then I sky up like a rocket Your rhymes stink like a foot, so it’s ‘bout time that you sock it ^^lmao this was so gay it was dope 7/10 When people see yo face, they always start to act a fool You get many people runnin’… “Are you the last day of school?” ^^wack meta how you worded it 4/10 I’ll separate yo lines up, like I was a fuckin’ comma Put two L’s on yo name and then say, “You suck, ‘LLama”’ ^^wtf is this 2/10 overall : 34/60 (57%) vote: SPuL |
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Voted For: Identical
hot battle fa sho...but i think we know who has the upper hand....my vote for identikal punchlines....8/10 struscture.....8/10 flow....7/10( a lil erratic at times) personals(8/10) multis(8.5/10) best line-said ya got banned for biting a quote...well god damn i guess u still ain't learned no fucking...clinic fertilization, we all know that u was born from an inmates sperm i remember her well, ya mom was the only woman i knew that could give head long but i guess if i were to go to her grave site... .................................................a nd piss on her tombstone i would be dead wrong ^^^^^WHOA^^^^ Spul-punchlines....6/10 struscture.....9/10 flow....7/10( a lil erratic at times) personals(6/10) mutils-6/10 best line-Say DQ wins are wack, you shouldn’t keep them on the shelf I should call you John Kerry, cuz you contradict yourself ^^and that was barely decent...step it up playboi...ive seen u do better........ and make sure yall vote on one of my battles...i will check! |
and it was an honest vote...so no hate Spul cause i know u from back in the day....
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