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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Absolutelt No D/R
No Hate

it's me again SPul, i'll explain why the new account after we drop our verses

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Identikal has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-14-04 03:55 PM.

SPuL has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-14-04 03:56 PM.

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it's no shock kid is fraud, inherited terrorist genes so he's the type to carry bombs
if ghostwriters are rv's version of steroids then u've been exposed like barry bonds
dml...? now i guess when it comes to online relationships u seem to be the better man
child fame...naw, spul seems to be the result of his father getting raped at neverland
kid has got no life, stays on rv when he's bored, it even shows in his thread names
came out the closet, he even admitted to having dsl,....
.................................................. ...now wonder why he likes to perform headgames
u was all excited and geeked, pm'ing me on AIM just to tell me about ya chat bot
ya not wanted here, ya pops should've have just left u...
............................................as a stain by his playboy magazine and his crack pot
said ya got banned for biting a quote...well god damn i guess u still ain't learned
no fucking...clinic fertilization, we all know that u was born from an inmates sperm
i remember her well, ya mom was the only woman i knew that could give head long
but i guess if i were to go to her grave site...
.................................................a nd piss on her tombstone i would be dead wrong
i'm about ready to fuck this bitch, flavored condoms, someone hand me a tan rubber
ok now let's see, kyrogenix, latinkitten,...
.......................i guess for future ghostwritings spul could just ask his grandmother

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Soldier (freestyle pt.1)

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vs. SPul (0-0)

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Soldier (freestyle pt.1)

Voted For: SPuL

1) didnt other cat go over limit?

2) spul won

opener: spul
closer: spul
wordplay: spul - came wit mad wordplay in dis, even highlighted it 4 us
personals: identikal - these were ok, nuttin crazy
punches: spul - ident had personals and used em but he neva really punched with 'em
originality: meh, tied
multis: neitha
lyrics: identikal
flow:spul
structure:spul - other cats was strecthed

overall

spul - 8.5/10
identikal - 7/10

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Voted For: SPuL

Identikal:
it's no shock kid is fraud, inherited terrorist genes so he's the type to carry bombs
if ghostwriters are rv's version of steroids then u've been exposed like barry bonds
Decent opener, a little stretched, but ok
dml...? now i guess when it comes to online relationships u seem to be the better man
child fame...naw, spul seems to be the result of his father getting raped at neverland
Weak...
kid has got no life, stays on rv when he's bored, it even shows in his thread names
came out the closet, he even admitted to having dsl,....
...now wonder why he likes to perform headgames
Ok personal
u was all excited and geeked, pm'ing me on AIM just to tell me about ya chat bot
ya not wanted here, ya pops should've have just left u...
...as a stain by his playboy magazine and his crack pot
Ok set up, but turned out weak...
said ya got banned for biting a quote...well god damn i guess u still ain't learned
no fucking...clinic fertilization, we all know that u was born from an inmates sperm
Decent punch, nothing too special
i remember her well, ya mom was the only woman i knew that could give head long
but i guess if i were to go to her grave site...
...and piss on her tombstone i would be dead wrong
Mom lines are played, this didn't hit very hard
i'm about ready to fuck this bitch, flavored condoms, someone hand me a tan rubber
ok now let's see, kyrogenix, latinkitten,...
...i guess for future ghostwritings spul could just ask his grandmother
Ok closer, good personal also

SPuL:
Say DQ wins are wack, you shouldn’t keep them on the shelf
I should call you John Kerry, cuz you contradict yourself
Decent opener here
I'll have yo head spinnin' like wheels on bicycle
Change yo name again, but the result will be indentikaL
Nice play off his name here, although bicycle and Identikal don't rhyme too well, that brings this bar down a lil' bit
My rhymes are cerebral, hit you wit ‘em, say "you’re mental"
And I’ll beat you wit no words, like you was an instrumental
Nice wordplay here, ok punch
The guards lift you off, and then I sky up like a rocket
Your rhymes stink like a foot, so it’s ‘bout time that you sock it
I liked this, good shit here
When people see yo face, they always start to act a fool
You get many people runnin’… “Are you the last day of school?”
Weak...
I’ll separate yo lines up, like I was a fuckin’ comma
Put two L’s on yo name and then say, “You suck, ‘LLama”’
Nice personal here, I noticed you were playing off his physical resemblance to Banks

Winner: SPuL, for harder punches, better wordplay...overall a better verse. Identikal, your structure was off, you gotta work on fixing those stretched lines. They were consistent throughout your entire verse, and that brings it down quite a bit. But other than that you had an aight drop, so no hate.

RTF at a link in my sig...

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