yo this was pretty good. nice vocabulary, wordplay and structure.i liked it. 9.5/10. you got potential. keep doing your thing.

im feeling that right there thats hot flow good vocab good and topic was tight i like the whole thing

9 years old, so bold, took on the mans role
but like "kelly rowland" whatever he had was "stole"
so much "weight" on his shoulders, could be classed obese
life story, like an old persons face,not without a crease
im feeling these, N flow was on-point nice........

i say u should join heavy hittaz for-real.......

u would fit prefect.....

^^^thanx a lot....

^^^r u the leader of the crew

nice drop ma......I love tha word play..........Keep doin ya thing an good things will happen

^^thank you.....

your welcome ma............will u good look at my thread an give me some feedbac on it. It's called Evil Ambitionz