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youngsta story
IP: 51E9 83E7
just a lil somethin i put together.......
a smile so contagious, young boy so courageous displays an attitude like, "nobody can phase us" though underneath that front, a lifes tainted a picture so complicated, nobody could paint it and sorrys belated, from the day his dad passed people got hurt, there were so many stones cast 9 years old, so bold, took on the mans role but like "kelly rowland" whatever he had was "stole" so much "weight" on his shoulders, could be classed obese life story, like an old persons face,not without a crease his mothers mind on overtime, her body just follows couldn't cry coz it seemed no one accustomed to sorrow tragedy struck, 11 years, witnessed a storm, hit hard provoked the "bad guy" his mum - the leading star scene like the red sea, drown in pools of blood so unexpected, everything gone, like an asian flood an orphan, still he never strayed, never turned to crime if only like r-kelly he could "turn back the hands of time" (uppin for feed)
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IP: 2356 63E7
pretty nice piece here....lil bit of wordplay....nicely done.....it seems to me ur from u.k or somethin huh
i like ur flow...u got cool structure.....and u stayed on topic....cool shyt peep my hip hop warrior and my final review.... d.a.
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Whys That?
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IP: 2AB1 EE10
ok drop, you number 1 from rw right?
anyway keep dropping. |
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IP: 106C 0083
chea i'm numero uno from rw....thanx for the feed ya'll
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IP: 6804 D41F
Preety Good Dwag I Felt Where Ure Coming From Good Emotion Flow Was A Little Off But Still Good Dwag...rhymes Were Tight Ight Wordplay...
Good Post Hit Up My Open Mic"freestyle" Peace...
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...Jea...
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IP: 3240 794D
yeah, good drop....nice vocab...it had good feeling to it too.......the flow wuz just a little bit off........other than that everything wuz good.....keep droppin
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IP: 8853 8E0E
^^^thanx for the feed...up...
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tha tightest thang in RV since Hang-man's rope*cough pussy hole*
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IP: 8E56 7956
i liked dis drop.....it showed alot of wordplay, some good vocab and it was original. i give it a 9.5/10 stay up on ya game shawdy.
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IP: 38BE 12F9
^^^thanx for the feed...up
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Light Weight
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IP: 9C24 44EC
that was nice shit good wordplay simalr things have been written on this topic but nice shit no hate
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tha tightest thang in RV since Hang-man's rope*cough pussy hole*
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IP: DB6F A83E
aiyo do me a favor shawdy n check dis new open mic i did....its called Thoughts of a Hustler, i NEED feedback please..........its linked in my sig it sez " tha best open mic you'll read this week"
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**the council**
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IP: D852 775E
^^^done.....uppin.....
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 28AD 5545
lol.........R kelly LOL n e ways I Liked ya Open Mic i Think It was Sick I DEF like the word play of it all .........................Infact i dont think there was nothing i Didnt Like bout it SO Keep up the good work
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 0825 899A
Hey mizz Fyre Do You Wanna do A Collab Wit Me Ill Give you the topic of the collab when you accept this Offer So Are you up?
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IP: B8C5 5ED9
^^^yeah alright....whats the topic???
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