Wow...this was really good man...especially for a keystyle...feeling the emotion and the topic...Great vocab and overall, a real good topical...I thought the structure and flow was fine throughout the piece...Nice job...Return the fav and leave some feed on the links in my sig...1

thnx 4 the feed, ill check the link's 4 you.

Good shit... i was feelin it... Nice vocab... structure was neat..

story was laid out well.. and contructed in a good way.. although there is a lot of pieces with the same theme.

Flow was pretty good.

i liked this a lot...good vocab and concept, the way the whole thing was made in parts it worked well for it, the flow was off in some places but generally it was good and i liked the ending, overall a really good piece i enjoyed reading it i didnt get drifted away while reading it either

peace

thnx for the feed.

back to the top, the fake lacking hip hop
fuck a pig, im slapping a cop..

I really liked thios, sorry I took so long to drop feed mayn.

I thought you started off really well, some powerful words and it read very well, but it started to be a bit off flow I think, maybe it was jsut how I read it, All yuour use of words and stuff was dope, I cant think that straight right now, so if this is a dodgy bit of feed, get at me when i'm next on, LMAO, dope drop tho fam, peace.

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Nice..flow was a lil off in places...structure a lil even..i liked concept....gd use of vocab..fva part would probs be adolescence....overall-8.5/10 Peace

Shit was decent I've seen betta

thnx for the feed.

umm i spose that mean's you also lotus.

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170871

this isnt ya 1st warning......

its just a heads-up on what u should do again.....

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not my first warning? about what? my link's? look at the very first thing in my original post.

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