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yea...good lookin on that...another honest vote. makes me happy....uppin this..........
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uppin this battle again.....too many battles is gettn slept on..........
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Voted For: Pyro
J DOT: decent drop from u, punches were decent & landed, structure was in place, and the flow was good...u had a pretty decent vocab too & decent wp's too...overall u had a good drop... .Mict.: you a had a decent drop also...the punches could've hit harder though, becuz mostly your structure fuck'd it up for you, the flow - -u lost me there..the vocab was nice...but overall it was your structure that fuck'd it up for you mayn.. im not sayin to elevate - -but im sayin to is that fix your structure though NO HATE TO BOTH. . . RTF J DOT http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=172258 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: .MictoriouS.
winner-mictorious flow-tie multi-mic punches-mic finisher-mic opener-tie Illest of Illy?, I’ll murk you for really…… ….Light this cat like a philly, yo rhymes played like Willie* And like him, they say PYRO’s a GIANT** …Im big as “Rocks” from “Colorado”, so call me Kobe Bryant*** nice simile, pretty good line Yo, Im sitting here, thinkin bout what you gon’ do …I got tha X-Ray…I could see the pussy in you dis was a funny line, good stuff The pussy is who? Mictorious. Take ya down real quick Im victorious in this battle, and in life, ur shit this was an ok line, not too good How you want it dawg?...test me? ya get ya card swiped Credit or debit?....Pyro decline yo life this was a pretty good line, Ya gotta soft bite, and ya bark is loud Lay u off like summer jobs, cause u softer than clouds pretty good finisher Its Time For My 'Nicks To Naughty Lizt'!! and not Have To Recognize "Rebellious Kids"... I Know Your Soul At 'The Back Of Fists'...So I'll Just Slit-Your-Wrists to Leave Ya Life Suffering from "Self Sacrifices"... !! Hot line, multies were there, and still kept the flow and punch one Pyro, I Baffle-Kids...So i won like 'Donald Trump' Doin Raffle-Bids This Mack'll spit and leave ya face 'One-Sided' Like this Battle-Is like the last one, punch was hard and so were the multis Put Your 'Barz In The Sky' So You Can Have High Hope's Whenever-I-Read-Ya-Verse, My Barz will Succeed -The-Worst, Cause Mictorious will 'Translate Ya Actions' Like Close-Captions-In-Theater's same^^^ One, First-we-Knew-ya-Died, then i'll make ya Heart Burst-till-ya-Fluid-Dried Cause Mic'll make Pyro Slit ya Own Throat n kill Yoself Worse-then-Suicide good punch Ya Gay-Thoughts-Will Never Heat Up or Stay-Coddled But I'll Decapitate This Bitch While He's Standing and Leave them Looking like Fucking Display-Models hot dawg Spay ina Pathetic-incident, And 'pop yer spine' leave ya 'holdin yer back' like 'senior-citizens!'. Hundred L's Get Sent, Op strap ya 'brain ta rockets' ta really 'raise yer-intelligence! killer punch |
good lookin out on tha votes...i got both ya'll on RTF...dont trip...
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Voted For: .MictoriouS.
u won hands down u kill him Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yall niggas needa learn how to explain ya votes.........upp in this
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Voted For: Pyro
GOTTA GO WIT DAT NIGGA J-DOT...HIS SHIT WAS SO MUCH BETTA...IT ALL FLOWD TOGETHA...BETTA PUNCHES...N HIS RHYMES WASNT STRECHED... MICTORIOUS-"Its Time For My 'Nicks To Naughty Lizt'!! and not Have To Recognize "Rebellious Kids"... I Know Your Soul At 'The Back Of Fists'...So I'll Just Slit-Your-Wrists to Leave Ya Life Suffering from "Self Sacrifices"... !! ".....THAT WHOLE THANG WAS WAY TOO STRECHED...IT WAS KIND OF "FORESHADOWING" FOR YA WHOLE VERSE ONCE I READ DAT COUPLE LINES.. RETURN DA LOVE PLAYA |
uppin this shit..........faggotss.....................
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Voted For: Pyro
Mictorious: hmm not bad the stucture was off my far but your punches are decent and some pretty good creativty in there but the reasons why im voteing against you is cuz you just didnt come hard enough J dot made it look like he wanted it more....you need to be more funnier in your rhymes n shit then you probably would of won....but alright peice...no hate J Dot: hmm pretty good i thouhgt you came harder and wanted it more you had some good punches and very good creativty damn i liked that alot and your stucture was decent and flowed pretty good....good peice from you....you got this one just by a string... Opener: J Dot Closer: Mic vocab: no one multis: Mic stucture: J Dot flow: J Dot Punches: J dot creativty: J dot WIN/ J Dot |
oops....RTF here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=173444 vs. personify....im winning that 4-1 |
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