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.MictoriouS. 2 28.57%
Pyro 5 71.43%
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Old 12-30-04, 05:42 PM   #1
M-Eazy
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From: Mackamento
.MictoriouS. vs Pyro

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Old 12-30-04, 05:46 PM   #2
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.MictoriouS. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-30-04 05:46 PM.
 
Old 12-30-04, 05:51 PM   #3
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Pyro has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-30-04 05:51 PM.
 
Old 12-30-04, 06:18 PM   #4
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Illest of Illy?, I’ll murk you for really……
….Light this cat like a philly, yo rhymes played like Willie*
And like him, they say PYRO’s a GIANT**
…Im big as “Rocks” from “Colorado”, so call me Kobe Bryant***

*Famous Baseball player-Willie Mays
**Willie Mays used to play on the Giants
***Kobe Bryant/That chick from Colorado



*Switch style up*
Yo,
Im sitting here, thinkin bout what you gon’ do
…I got tha X-Ray…I could see the pussy in you
The pussy is who? Mictorious. Take ya down real quick
Im victorious in this battle, and in life, ur shit
How you want it dawg?...test me? ya get ya card swiped
Credit or debit?....Pyro decline yo life
Ya gotta soft bite, and ya bark is loud
Lay u off like summer jobs, cause u softer than clouds


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Old 12-30-04, 06:31 PM   #5
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Its Time For My 'Nicks To Naughty Lizt'!! and not Have To Recognize "Rebellious Kids"...
I Know Your Soul At 'The Back Of Fists'...So I'll Just Slit-Your-Wrists to Leave Ya Life Suffering from "Self Sacrifices"... !!

Pyro, I Baffle-Kids...So i won like 'Donald Trump' Doin Raffle-Bids
This Mack'll spit and leave ya face 'One-Sided' Like this Battle-Is

Put Your 'Barz In The Sky' So You Can Have High Hope's Whenever-I-Read-Ya-Verse, My Barz will Succeed -The-Worst,
Cause Mictorious will 'Translate Ya Actions' Like Close-Captions-In-Theater's

One, First-we-Knew-ya-Died, then i'll make ya Heart Burst-till-ya-Fluid-Dried
Cause Mic'll make Pyro Slit ya Own Throat n kill Yoself Worse-then-Suicide

Ya Gay-Thoughts-Will Never Heat Up or Stay-Coddled
But I'll Decapitate This Bitch While He's Standing and Leave them Looking like Fucking Display-Models

Spay ina Pathetic-incident, And 'pop yer spine' leave ya 'holdin yer back' like 'senior-citizens!'.
Hundred L's Get Sent, Op strap ya 'brain ta rockets' ta really 'raise yer-intelligence!
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Old 12-30-04, 10:52 PM   #6
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i shouldve came harder....uppn this, lets get it closed quick....
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Old 12-31-04, 10:28 AM   #7
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Yeh .. This one is a sleeper seriously ... well

uppin for votes :]
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Old 12-31-04, 11:21 AM   #8
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Voted For: .MictoriouS.

he got this with his wordplay i was feelin that shit dawg fa real tha otha dude came correct to tho but yo wordplay is what won it return tha favor
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chucklow vs. javelin
chucklow vs. jbkryptonite
chucklow vs death

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Old 12-31-04, 01:30 PM   #9
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Voted For: Pyro

voted 4
.MictoriouS.
better vocab
word play crushed him
his metas ummm about a tie
his punlines where crazy easily killed the competition
good battle to the both of u

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Quote:
Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


Quote:
Originally Posted by NarKotic
Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
 
Old 12-31-04, 01:31 PM   #10
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yo i meant to vote for mictorius my bad im am really sorry for the mix up!
 
Old 12-31-04, 02:10 PM   #11
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iigh ... its fucking ... 2 - 0 then ... peace ....
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Old 01-08-05, 08:34 PM   #12
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Uppin .. peoples .. :]
And
How did my vote thing go away?
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Old 01-08-05, 09:26 PM   #13
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This was feedback posted for .MictoriouS.

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Punches - Both had soft punhces. Mic had more, a bit softer and Pyro had some harder punches, but not much harder than Mic. Soits a tie here

Personals- Where the fuck are the personals???

Multis - MIc had the greatest amount of multis and the most complex ones at that

Flow- Since he did have the complex multis Mic had the better flow

Overall = Mic, Weak battle from you both. You could have come harder.
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Old 01-10-05, 04:03 PM   #14
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uppin this.....................

50 characters is alotta bullshit
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Old 01-10-05, 04:57 PM   #15
atti?
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Voted For: Pyro

This Was Suprisingly A Good Battle...

Dot Had Some Dope Ish In The Begining, And Actually I Think I've Seen You On Sixshot...
Wich Explains Alot Cuz Only Us Six Heads Write That Way...

Mic Seamed To Be Trying To Hard To Get Dope Wordplay...
And In The End Alot Of It Is Just Random Bull Shit...
Although Every Few Bars You Would Wow Me With One Bar...
So It Shows Me You COULD Be Hott You Just Gotta Be More Consistant...
Aiight So Here Is A Quick Breakdown:

Flow: Dot
Punches: Dot
Wordplay: Dot
Structure: Dot
Opener: Dot
Closer: Mic
Overall Enjoyment: Dot

Mic Just Wasnt Consistant Enough...
And All Your Lines Were INCREEEEEEDIBLY Streched...
So The Flow Was Killed On Every Line, Even The Good Ones...
If You Just Had Someone Help You With A Few Things You'd be Pretty Crazy At This Though...

Aiight Here Are Some Of The Highlights:

Dot:
Illest of Illy?, I’ll murk you for really……
….Light this cat like a philly, yo rhymes played like Willie*
And like him, they say PYRO’s a GIANT**
…Im big as “Rocks” from “Colorado”, so call me Kobe Bryant***
These Are Actually Seperate Bars But You Meshed Them Together. But The Wordplay On This Was Fucking Iiiiiiiiiinsane. I Was Feeling All Of It Especially The Bryan Line That Was Pretty Slick.

Im sitting here, thinkin bout what you gon’ do
…I got tha X-Ray…I could see the pussy in you
Not A Huge Line But Its Just One Of Those Simply Ones That You Cant Help But To Feel, Pretty Nice.

Mic:
Pyro, I Baffle-Kids...So i won like 'Donald Trump' Doin Raffle-Bids
This Mack'll spit and leave ya face 'One-Sided' Like this Battle-Is
Woooooow That Was A Fucking Nice Line. See If All Your Lines Were That Length It Would Improve The Read Sooooo Much Cuz That Was A Hott Fucking Line.

Ya Gay-Thoughts-Will Never Heat Up or Stay-Coddled
But I'll Decapitate This Bitch While He's Standing and Leave them Looking like Fucking Display-Models
This Is One Of Those Lines, Nothing All That Special. Just A Raw Ass Punch That I Just For Some Reason Reeeeally Like. Pretty Tite.

Hundred L's Get Sent, Op strap ya 'brain ta rockets' ta really 'raise yer-intelligence!
I Like This Part Of The Bar. It Had Pretty Nice Wordplay In It But It Actually Didnt Rhym All That Well With The Other Part Of The Bar. But It Was Nice.

Like I Said Pretty Decent Battle...
Both Had Nice Wordplay n Punches...
Dot Was Just More Consistant And Mics Ish Was Soooo Streched That The Flow Was Slaughtered In Just About Every Bar...

Aiight, And I'd Apreciate If The Favor Could Be Returned On This O.M.:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170702

Thanks Alot And Stay Up...
.One.
 
 


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