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dOpEbOi 210 0 0%
L~S 5 100.00%
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Old 02-05-05, 06:22 PM   #1
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L~S vs dOpEbOi 210

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Old 02-05-05, 06:22 PM   #2
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Old 02-05-05, 06:23 PM   #3
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his names L~S cuz he ona Losin-Streak
cuz like 14 days...u too-weak
nigga u mo' sweet then swishas
ill hav u mo' distraut den hopeful wishas
im gettin da easy W hands down in dis battle
ill leave ya head mo' sideways then dolley P on her saddle
u couldnt turn tricks even if u was sleezy
lay off da NWA nigga...cuz like mista E..u too EZ
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Old 02-05-05, 06:23 PM   #4
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Old 02-05-05, 06:24 PM   #5
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dopeboi u gonna need some hope boy
u anit gonna beable to cope boy
ya rhymnes are shit man ya cant rap
wrap ya rhymes is one slap trap with ya strap
homo thinking he hard man the war has only just began
im rhyming from japan rhymes so hard hit him down from there
sure u dont wanna edit ya rhymes and repair beware but u in hospital care
ya wack nuffin to stay on rv for u suck just here to get some RV buck
man ya have been took* u just anit worth the hassle so go have ur homo suck

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Old 02-05-05, 06:25 PM   #6
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aiight my verse is in playa.....i only got 2 battle creds now.........damn...cant believe i wasyed 5 on a battle u declined
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Old 02-05-05, 06:26 PM   #7
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nigga u pre-write like no othaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....i already had my verse in on tha battle u declined...but its all good...uppin
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Old 02-05-05, 06:27 PM   #8
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i dont pre-write how do i pre-write

or do uu mean cuz i did it so quick
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Old 02-05-05, 06:29 PM   #9
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i dont think u did that verse cuz like u said u only wanted 6 lines n how u suck...n i made a battle wit 6-15 lines but u ducked it...then u change it to an 8 line only battle....n u still spit 9 lines
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Old 02-05-05, 06:30 PM   #10
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i always do 6 lines but i never do more than 8 but so i though id make it fair and give u some crd so i put 8

and my bad about the 9............
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Old 02-05-05, 06:46 PM   #11
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uppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nn
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Old 02-05-05, 06:48 PM   #12
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i ain't even gonna vote on this battle cause it too wack to even be a battle.
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Old 02-06-05, 07:29 AM   #13
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uppin.................i didnt even try..................
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Old 02-06-05, 07:47 AM   #14
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i think im gna have to give this to l~s you have elevated alot good job here...

dopeboi...

his names L~S cuz he ona Losin-Streak
cuz like 14 days...u too-weak
^^ nice first line kinda simple but the second line lost the punch
nigga u mo' sweet then swishas
ill hav u mo' distraut den hopeful wishas
^^ not feelin tht line i didnt get it
im gettin da easy W hands down in dis battle
ill leave ya head mo' sideways then dolley P on her saddle
^^ hmm spose it was an ight punch
u couldnt turn tricks even if u was sleezy
lay off da NWA nigga...cuz like mista E..u too EZ
^^ he was never on nwa... fake personal...

overall i thought u had a coupkle of good lines... your flow was good structure was good but the vocab was too simple ill have to give you 6.10

L~s...

dopeboi u gonna need some hope boy
u anit gonna beable to cope boy
^^ no punch but good use of multies
ya rhymnes are shit man ya cant rap
wrap ya rhymes is one slap trap with ya strap
^^ kindoff a punch good use of multies agen
homo thinking he hard man the war has only just began
^^ dont know waht was going on there
im rhyming from japan rhymes so hard hit him down from there
sure u dont wanna edit ya rhymes and repair beware but u in hospital care
^^ decent punch but kinda simple
ya wack nuffin to stay on rv for u suck just here to get some RV buck
man ya have been took* u just anit worth the hassle so go have ur homo suck
^^ alryt punch i guess alryyt closure...

overall i think u have elevated alot well done... you had some decnt multies in there flow was good structure was ight and u had a couple of punches in there... imma give it to you becuz of flow multies and the structure if u had more punches you wouldav won this eazy...

6.3.10

alryyt battle... stay up
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Old 02-06-05, 07:51 AM   #15
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thanx 4 da vote...............uppin...............
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