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L~S vs dOpEbOi 210
Battle Rules:
8 - Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 300 Check in by: 02-05-05 at 06:52 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
dOpEbOi 210 has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-05-05 06:22 PM.
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his names L~S cuz he ona Losin-Streak
cuz like 14 days...u too-weak nigga u mo' sweet then swishas ill hav u mo' distraut den hopeful wishas im gettin da easy W hands down in dis battle ill leave ya head mo' sideways then dolley P on her saddle u couldnt turn tricks even if u was sleezy lay off da NWA nigga...cuz like mista E..u too EZ |
L~S has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-05-05 06:23 PM.
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dopeboi u gonna need some hope boy u anit gonna beable to cope boy ya rhymnes are shit man ya cant rap wrap ya rhymes is one slap trap with ya strap homo thinking he hard man the war has only just began im rhyming from japan rhymes so hard hit him down from there sure u dont wanna edit ya rhymes and repair beware but u in hospital care ya wack nuffin to stay on rv for u suck just here to get some RV buck man ya have been took* u just anit worth the hassle so go have ur homo suck *merked |
aiight my verse is in playa.....i only got 2 battle creds now.........damn...cant believe i wasyed 5 on a battle u declined
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nigga u pre-write like no othaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....i already had my verse in on tha battle u declined...but its all good...uppin
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i dont pre-write how do i pre-write
or do uu mean cuz i did it so quick |
i dont think u did that verse cuz like u said u only wanted 6 lines n how u suck...n i made a battle wit 6-15 lines but u ducked it...then u change it to an 8 line only battle....n u still spit 9 lines
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i always do 6 lines but i never do more than 8 but so i though id make it fair and give u some crd so i put 8
and my bad about the 9............ |
uppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nn
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This was feedback posted for L~S
i ain't even gonna vote on this battle cause it too wack to even be a battle.
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uppin.................i didnt even try..................
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Voted For: L~S
i think im gna have to give this to l~s you have elevated alot good job here... dopeboi... his names L~S cuz he ona Losin-Streak cuz like 14 days...u too-weak ^^ nice first line kinda simple but the second line lost the punch nigga u mo' sweet then swishas ill hav u mo' distraut den hopeful wishas ^^ not feelin tht line i didnt get it im gettin da easy W hands down in dis battle ill leave ya head mo' sideways then dolley P on her saddle ^^ hmm spose it was an ight punch u couldnt turn tricks even if u was sleezy lay off da NWA nigga...cuz like mista E..u too EZ ^^ he was never on nwa... fake personal... overall i thought u had a coupkle of good lines... your flow was good structure was good but the vocab was too simple ill have to give you 6.10 :thumbup: L~s... dopeboi u gonna need some hope boy u anit gonna beable to cope boy ^^ no punch but good use of multies ya rhymnes are shit man ya cant rap wrap ya rhymes is one slap trap with ya strap ^^ kindoff a punch good use of multies agen homo thinking he hard man the war has only just began ^^ dont know waht was going on there im rhyming from japan rhymes so hard hit him down from there sure u dont wanna edit ya rhymes and repair beware but u in hospital care ^^ decent punch but kinda simple ya wack nuffin to stay on rv for u suck just here to get some RV buck man ya have been took* u just anit worth the hassle so go have ur homo suck ^^ alryt punch i guess alryyt closure... overall i think u have elevated alot well done... you had some decnt multies in there flow was good structure was ight and u had a couple of punches in there... imma give it to you becuz of flow multies and the structure if u had more punches you wouldav won this eazy... 6.3.10 alryyt battle... stay up :thumbup: |
thanx 4 da vote...............uppin...............
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