yo this shit is real ill.... it was defenatly a diffrent concept...............

i give yall b ig props best shit i seen in a while........

alright I liked this a lot..even though it seemed long as fuck...the whole transition from person to person made it go by quickly...imagery was really good...i could see everything that was happening...message was really dope...i liked the whole concept period...vocab was dope...flow seemed a bit off at times...but i could have been readin it wrong....regardless.....very nice piece

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one of the illest open mics i read ever 2 of the best topical writers together shits dope...

the flow was on point from both people and i never got offtrack at all through all of it and it seemed long but it really wasnt...when i first looked at it i thought it would take a while but i read it its not that long with the chorus and all i liked the intro i never seen that before a very creative idea and how everything was laid out i like the back and forth style...vocabulary was on point as well from both and everything was basically top notch really good shit props to both...

if you could check out me and anxietys first collab in my sig its dope...

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yo at first i was helal confused like wtf in the hell is going on, but after that it was straight dope man feeling everything it sorta had a toy soldiers feel to it stay up doing ya thing big ups melv

Mayne You Got 2 Ill Topical Writers Doing An Callab Together, And You've Got An Dope Open Mic, Nice Shit, From Both Sides. Peace.

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holy shit im surprised that was some straight dope shit...it had this style i heard on rb but it wa saudio but it was exacly like it but not audio..this was straight dope...i like how both had there thign with the flow...ight check it

abby:
man you threw it down very emotional and you were very good and creative with vocabulary and i liked how you used real rank witty metas in there very nice....you used some pretty good wordplay in there and your stucture was great...nice multis...done well with the flow you did a dope job...very emotional peice form both of you...i think yall had your things...but yall was tight...NO NEED TO RATE PURE DOPENESS

indeph:
ight homie you as well threw this down...so dope...you love this i supose like damn your emotion is so damn rank i dont understand how you do it so well....very good with the vocab and the multis were beyond dopeness lmao.......but shit you were so creative with multis n all that and also your pictures both ayll created for me was good..and the wordplay indeph you were working well...both yall cats threw it down..NO NEED TO RATE PURE DOPENESS

yall really threw it down an honest all around rating for yall together...9.7/10
i jsut liked how when yall would switch it would still go good together kinda like a keystyle...good job...

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yo abby link in the sig thanks..indeph already droped feed so abby thank you...and good luck at life..pz

damn, crazy shit....
real creative...
i liked da beging, wit the radio interviews, those were hot and i havent seen much shit like dat before (especially liked indephs, since he did it on mah bday, lol....)
ab man, vocab was insane on dis one, i was definetly feelin it...
both of you had a real nice flow throughout da whole thing, real good work...
props guys, some of the best stuff ive seen from both of you....

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Nice shit brutha... Radio shit at the start was pretty creative, and it sort of made it sound more audio which is what I like.. Even though I hate text OM's, this one was pretty good..

Props.

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the top topical duo is here this will be one of the nominated peices ofr open mic of the month

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damn........this was one hot as fuck topical collab......this OM was very creative as well....this shit needs to be put in OM of the month

9/10

~~~~~~~``stay up

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this was good...........its a good concept overall, almost reminds me of eminems toy soilder video.

imagery was real good......you wre both creative and had good vocab..wordplay was good just overall this is above most Om's here you guys are on another level with thsi shit

2 ill topical heads????...mayne this is tight...no critiques from my pert just like the others cos they've said enuff...the concept was very good...the whole piece flowed very well...i really enjoyed it...gd job both of u..keep it up!!

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aye. this was hot no doubt...i usually dont come in these forums, but that shit made me change my mind. that was hot...for real. i was lovin tha all around flow on yall's verses, and ur styles and shit. i think tha verses really formulated well together. i was loving tha structure and tha rhyming in this. i think this could be OM of tha month......well, of course it will be to me, this is tha first one i looked at this month, but i feel aint nobody on RV gunna blaze like that. but i kinda felt tha intro was irrelevant. i wasnt really feelin it, but w/e. tha flow was nice. yall got skillz, real talk....stay up.................................1