Thanks alot you 2 for the feedback, much appreciated,

Uppin for more:)

Uppin

yo i was feelin it dawg may-b u should beat dudes ass first chance you get
stay up dawg

1ne

go peep my shit, i need feedback fa reals

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=17122

thanks for the feedback,

Yeah guys a dick, theres a few dicks near me,

Uppin for more feed,
:)

shit was pretty hott...a little simplistic but fo sho you got your point across....

give me your opinions on my latest posts down and out andthat concience theyre tihgt as hell

thanks for the feed, Ive peeped one of your pieces and the other will be done in a minute.....

Uppin for more feed...:)

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jay dee...this was good in a simplistic way..lol..nah mean..but i was feelin this...well keep spittin dee...pz...~unoluv~

Thanks for the feedback

Anyway im out mad late in England Pz.

Uppin for feedback

Shit was Wack.....then muthafuckas wonder why Open Mic is Weak And Wack....shit like this should just stay in ya little "rap journal" Notebook....just my thoughts...



Peace....
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if you didnt like it fair enough it was only a simple piece and it took me like 15 minutes to write. But hey thanks for being honest.