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Old 07-14-02, 09:31 PM   #1
Jay Dee
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Single Verse- Feedback Please

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Yo i just wrote this verse in about 15 minutes about some kid silly idiot I know, its just 20 lines.

So whats up, still wanna talk shit Tom,
And get broken down like the heels of your fat Mom,
Tell me were u at, you and your men,
Cause Ive got no problem laying into you and your big brother Ben,
See you tried to be a thorn in my side,
But everytime Ive come looking you’ve found somewhere to hide,
Cause your nothing more than a rich boy trying to act rough,
You live in a huge house and your Dad drives a Jag,
Shaved head, Rockports, on you just makes you look like a fag,
Smoke dope cause of the simple reason you a wannabe gangster,
About a year ago you were rocking Offspring, Original Prankster,
I remember you, listening to shit like Slipknot,
Are Oxide and Neutrino cool, they must be one of them got shot,
So if all goes quiet don’t think Ive forgot,
Im no dumby I have a long memory,
I keep a mental note of who trys to offend me,
But now your wishing you didn’t start shit,
But Im the one who will say when this is it,
And im not in that mood at all, so get ready,
Cause you never know Tom, you might have to deal with some shit,

Feedback Please good or bad


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