This was a pretty decent peice. I liked the first verse and the hook alot.

The 2nd verse started amazing. The fish bowl visual is nice. But then it trailed off.
3rd Verse was solid, with a few gaps in flow.
Emotion was everywhere...


Good Peice.

thanx for the feed people uppin for some more

Resembles the pink floyd song, dope piece overall man, good vocabulary and some ill emotion in your lines, i look forward to that topical..pc

hey man i like your taste in music....Pink Floyd, what a classic...Wish You Were Here.....i love that song, btw that song inspired me to write this some what.....i didn't think this would get any feed...well atleast now.....but i apparently forgot to take the link out my sig a LONG ass time ago lol well hey tahnx for the feed....uppin? lol