Voted For: Underlined

This one is clear cut underline.

This dude can't rap, and he probably wonders why
He's a gay, crossdressing, wanksta, named Underlined
YEA THIS ONE'S NO GOOD
You can't touch me dude, it's like I'm Sound Proof
I call you my son, then I'm a have to Ground You
THAT ONE HAD POTENTIAL BUT FELL SHORT
One rhyme will just simply wipe your crew
It's like bedtime for you, lights out dude
NAH TRY AGAIN
When I'm around, you like to hide fo a while
You scared? You ain't have a line in ya profile
WAS THAT A PERSONAL?
Do Rap Verse a favor, and go commit suicide
Forgot to buckle up, I'm legit, you ain't true to ride
BAD CLOSER
BEST LINE: One rhyme will just simply wipe your crew
It's like bedtime for you, lights out dude

you cant be serious, ive already won this battle by far
i mean cmon...look at your name...thats exactly what you are
HE'S A METEOR?
and i know i could take you...including your entire team
cuz you made a thread in HHT askin for writing techniques...
NICE PERSONAL, TAKES RESEARCH, YOUR THINKIN, I LIKE THAT
but let me be brief...simply put your just a disaster
when you drop your lines...the end result is just laughter
SET UP SOUNDS LIKE A MULTI, DECENT PUNCH
your shit is wack straight up but i aint full of hate
its jus ya lines are outdated...like the black and white in your name
DIDN'T QUITE RHYME AND PUNCH DIDN'T LAND
when you retire...nobody would want an encore from you kid...
speakin of encore, youll just fall off worse then the emcee in ya sig...
NICE TRY ALTHOUGH EM DIDN'T REALLY FALL OFF

v/underline no hate return the favor holla at ya boy the blackmage

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Still think im DR? You lost this straight up, get over it. px

Yeah I still think your a DRing bitch, I have my reasons

Uppin, good luck Underlined

Voted For: Underlined

underlined...........
you cant be serious, ive already won this battle by far
i mean cmon...look at your name...thats exactly what you are
he's a meteor?....ehh not a good opener....4/10

and i know i could take you...including your entire team
cuz you made a thread in HHT askin for writing techniques...
decent personal here...didnt hit all that well though...6/10

but let me be brief...simply put your just a disaster
when you drop your lines...the end result is just laughter
ehh ok....5/10

your shit is wack straight up but i aint full of hate
its jus ya lines are outdated...like the black and white in your name
decent....6/10

when you retire...nobody would want an encore from you kid...
speakin of encore, youll just fall off worse then the emcee in ya sig...
decent personal......7/10

overall...........28/50


Meteor..........
This dude can't rap, and he probably wonders why
He's a gay, crossdressing, wanksta, named Underlined
not good.....3/10

You can't touch me dude, it's like I'm Sound Proof
I call you my son, then I'm a have to Ground You
ok.....4/10

One rhyme will just simply wipe your crew
It's like bedtime for you, lights out dude
ok attempt at wordplay....5/10

When I'm around, you like to hide fo a while
You scared? You ain't have a line in ya profile
not too good...4/10

Do Rap Verse a favor, and go commit suicide
Forgot to buckle up, I'm legit, you ain't true to ride
not too great of a closer.....4/10

overall......20/50


underlined just came with harder and more complex punches......both had off structure.....no real wordplay from either....underline had an ok personal....but this basically just goes to underline for harder hitting punches throughtout the verse.....PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR UNDERLINE.....link in sig...thanks

This was feedback posted for MetEoR-K
 

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Voted For: Underlined

no contest, underlined takes this...........meteor K's verse was weak and terrible....i liked undelined's verse....it had a nice flow to it, and had a few multies, i also liked the personalz and punches, they killed em manye, meteor-k, bad verse mang, elevate sum and you'll have some potenital, but you need to elevate alot, espesially with word choice vocab multies and ounches.........underlined did better in every category....

v/underlined

plz rtf, links in sig............................................... .........