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Intensify Effect 5 55.56%
Blackmage 4 44.44%
Voters: 9. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 01-25-05, 11:32 PM   #1
Blackmage
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From: chambana,illinois
Intensify Effect vs Blackmage

IP: A4E7 A821

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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes (since some a yall gotta be reminded)

2 days to accept and 2 days to post( you ain't the only one with shit to do)

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Old 01-26-05, 11:50 PM   #2
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Blackmage has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-26-05 11:50 PM.
 
Old 01-27-05, 07:23 AM   #3
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intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-27-05 07:23 AM.
 
Old 01-27-05, 10:15 PM   #4
Blackmage
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From: chambana,illinois
IP: A4E7 A821

I "Intensify" the "effect" of my "Eternal Illness"
just so we clear special "effects" are fake they lack realness
your sentences are sentenced to death i'm the ropeman
i'll beat you like a junkie tryin to steal from his "dopeman"
talk glochs you won't shoot you no brute your flo's cute
and if i'm a full blown herb what's that make you a "square "root"
I "intensify" my pencil-eye precision for fast collision
you challenge me you'll get the "third degree", bad decision
you lack masculinity i pack "mass" like divinity
your wack you're into me i don't son you dog we're trinity

Eternal Illness is his group
He lost to dopeman and third degree
church mass - divinity - trinity
trinity is the unity of father son and the holy spirit
divinity is to be divine - to relate or proceed directly from god

good luck
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Old 01-29-05, 06:51 AM   #5
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lesson in progress.....

u act like u a,
savage for life? more like average for your whole exsistance...
like leg-less marathon runners, i just can't see you going the distance...
flowing persistant and your caught at a stand still...
a hard verse for u just takes up space like land fill...
i merk you dawg...shit...i leave you stuttering, shook...
your lines get no attention, like blind kids coloring books....
now look at u taking ya time, with more extension then a hair-salon...
plus u couldnt "Pull" on a WIN... place'in ya verse in a water bong...

*now lets finish him*

my style so cold that i froze ya-line... with punches n flow combined...
ya mind-designed so empty, beat'in u in da head i'll sound like a drum-lines...
just face it, u got more played parts then samuel.L.jackson...
take acttion?, why when u'r style more ut dated then IRAQ mapping...
it's over, no votes are needed...cuz he even dout -he's-won-it.....
cuz ya ideas of punches are more empty then ethiopian-stomachs...... BITCH!!! U've BEEN SERVED...

class has been offical THOUGHT!!!
 
Old 01-29-05, 02:34 PM   #6
Dio Deus
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This was feedback posted for intensify effect

IP: A1F9 13ED

maybe it's used a lot of times, but I said in one of my battle,
"no personals or wordplay need to defeat you,
the victory, THERE AIN'T VOTES NEED, TO SEE WHO'S"
I dunno, if you read it and used but I guess you just made it yourself...........
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Old 01-29-05, 05:17 PM   #7
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^^^??okay???

upp'in for actual votes inted of feed back plez................
 
Old 01-30-05, 01:04 PM   #8
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upp'in............................................ ....................
 
Old 01-31-05, 07:23 PM   #9
Sick.
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Voted For: Blackmage

iight here we go ...

Black Mage
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MAD WORD PLAYY
i was feelin the opener usin his name and crew
and how ya used the cats he got merked by to ya advantage *9th degree nd Dopeman* cuz i seen those battles and that was good research on your part .. vocab was iight .. flow was niice too but overall the Wordplay is what got my vote

Intensify Effect
wasnt feelin ya verse.. you had some good punches but i didnt see any clearly directed AT black mage.. they were good but didnt do it for me lol ... vocab was niice flow was good and multies were tight .. but overall it wasnt good'nuff for my vote

my votes - BLACK MAGE
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Old 02-02-05, 08:15 AM   #10
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Tha Godfatha
Voted For: Blackmage

iight here we go ...

Black Mage
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MAD WORD PLAYY
i was feelin the opener usin his name and crew
and how ya used the cats he got merked by to ya advantage *9th degree nd Dopeman* cuz i seen those battles and that was good research on your part .. vocab was iight .. flow was niice too but overall the Wordplay is what got my vote

Intensify Effect
wasnt feelin ya verse.. you had some good punches but i didnt see any clearly directed AT black mage.. they were good but didnt do it for me lol ... vocab was niice flow was good and multies were tight .. but overall it wasnt good'nuff for my vote

my votes - BLACK MAGE


shut the fuck up....
cuz i dont even remember battling 9th dagree....
and dopeman beat me on some bull-shit dick ryder votes that he payed for and exchanged vote for.....

but i aint even tripp'in cuz i know for a fact my verse was WAY BETTER....
and u never peep those battle cuz u never voted.....
 
Old 02-04-05, 08:02 AM   #11
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upp'in............................................ .....
 
Old 02-07-05, 04:47 PM   #12
Blackmage
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From: chambana,illinois
IP: A4E7 A821

when i said that i meant third degree, and when you get the third degree you get interrogated. And I.E., way better huh uhhhhhhhhhhh.......no anyway i.e. calm down this battle wasn't that serious and whoever voted for me, read a little closer
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Coming soon to a soundclick near you...

........Shit.....Nigga.......
 
Old 02-07-05, 05:06 PM   #13
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Voted For: Blackmage

IE:
savage for life? more like average for your whole exsistance...
like leg-less marathon runners, i just can't see you going the distance...
blah, amputee lines are played
flowing persistant and your caught at a stand still...
a hard verse for u just takes up space like land fill...
setup was decet, punch doesn't connect
i merk you dawg...shit...i leave you stuttering, shook...
your lines get no attention, like blind kids coloring books....
Best bar in your verse
now look at u taking ya time, with more extension then a hair-salon...
plus u couldnt "Pull" on a WIN... place'in ya verse in a water bong...
Setup was better than the punch, woulda been better if you switched 'em
my style so cold that i froze ya-line... with punches n flow combined...
ya mind-designed so empty, beat'in u in da head i'll sound like a drum-lines...
Weak
just face it, u got more played parts then samuel.L.jackson...
take acttion?, why when u'r style more ut dated then IRAQ mapping...
Didn't really rhyme
it's over, no votes are needed...cuz he even dout -he's-won-it.....
cuz ya ideas of punches are more empty then ethiopian-stomachs...
Decet closer

blackmage:
I "Intensify" the "effect" of my "Eternal Illness"
just so we clear special "effects" are fake they lack realness
Decent personal, Ok opener overall
your sentences are sentenced to death i'm the ropeman
i'll beat you like a junkie tryin to steal from his "dopeman"
Decent personal, wouldn't have worked without the explanation though
talk glochs you won't shoot you no brute your flo's cute
and if i'm a full blown herb what's that make you a "square "root"
Good punch, best bar in your verse
I "intensify" my pencil-eye precision for fast collision
you challenge me you'll get the "third degree", bad decision
Another personal that wouldn't work without explaining it
you lack masculinity i pack "mass" like divinity
your wack you're into me i don't son you dog we're trinity
setup was good, punch was weak

merk you dawg...shit...i leave you stuttering, shook...
your lines get no attention, like blind kids coloring books....
vs.
talk glochs you won't shoot you no brute your flo's cute
and if i'm a full blown herb what's that make you a "square "root"

blackmage wins.

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Old 02-08-05, 10:01 PM   #14
Blackmage
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From: chambana,illinois
IP: A4E7 A821

Thanks ninth much love uppin this bitch for some votes yall cmon
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Fuck being creative, you guys have certainly given up on it
GET DOPER

Knowledge is Power, Stop being Weak

The Legend of Blackmage
Featuring such heads as...Tha Q, 9th degree, Enygma,The green team, Big J and probably you! SO DON'T SLEEP!

Coming soon to a soundclick near you...

........Shit.....Nigga.......
 
Old 02-08-05, 10:20 PM   #15
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Voted For: intensify effect

IE got this battle wrapped up
he had a way better flow and punches htat hit harder n more often. also he had some nice multies in there that just made his verse sound even better.
both of yall had pretty good structure but black mages' verse was too basic n so was the vocab. need to make ya punches more creative so they hit harder. n try to set them up better to so they hit just right nah mean...
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