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Old 02-02-05, 07:13 PM   #1
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TuNiT vs SQUAD-UP

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Old 02-02-05, 07:26 PM   #2
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TuNiT has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-02-05 07:26 PM.
 
Old 02-02-05, 07:35 PM   #3
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yo i'll leave ya squad down like they got struck in a drive by SHOOTIN
you aint never gonna get no 'kicks'...unless footlockers 'RECRUITIN''
am bootin niguhs in the face an leavin em to ROT
so its deez rhymes you gotta worry about not gettin SHOT
we all know your NOT a thug or even part of a SQUAD
an i got artilary that'll leave you 'holy' as GOD
you an hookers are 2 peas in a POD, why? cuz ya both SUCK
steppin ta me, u gon need more than LUCK, cuz i'll rearrange ya facial features like NIP/TUCK
ya rhymes about as 'PHAT' as a supermodel on a DIET
so errr, now ima go librarian on ya ass n tell you ta 'BE QUIET'
 
Old 02-04-05, 08:06 PM   #4
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SQUAD-UP has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-04-05 08:06 PM.
 
Old 02-06-05, 06:46 PM   #5
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SQUUUUUAAAAD UP!!!!!!!!!

chea, uh i dont play... tell my boy to gimme my beam
wit a bigger "Scope" on it than Jimmy Iovine's
ya bars just wack, i eat em like lunch snacks
put lumps in ya shoulder blades bigger than hunch backs
t-unit could bump back, .....but if he does that
i'll dump that,oneclap put u in the dirt where the bugs at
Fuck that, u run ya jaws but neva win
ya a "new era" rapper cuz ya bars never "fitted" in
u first n im last? then its time for us to switch ends
tha punches "strike" harder than the hands on Big Ben
shit ends, u was never "fuckin str8" so ya dick bends
only time T was "on the ball" was Bic Pens......EASSSSY
 
Old 02-06-05, 06:48 PM   #6
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uppin for votes holla at ya boy squad and they will b returned wit honest opinions
 
Old 02-06-05, 11:48 PM   #7
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uppin for votes holla at ya boy squad and they will b returned wit honest opinions
 
Old 02-07-05, 12:01 AM   #8
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Voted For: SQUAD-UP

easy win 4 u fam..ya shit was more creative and hottah than t's shit no personal's but fukk it...t u look like u got potential but dis battle u came real basic nahmean like da last line dat was some shit a nigga would say a few ago

opener-squad
structure-squad...t ya last line was madd long
punchlines-squad datz where he killed
creativity-squad
multis-squad
wordplay-squad had a lil
personals-nun
finisher-squad
enjoyed-squad...nuff said
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Old 02-07-05, 06:55 AM   #9
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uppin for votes holla at ya boy squad and they will b returned wit honest opinions
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Old 02-07-05, 03:42 PM   #10
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uppin for votes holla at ya boy squad and they will b returned wit honest opinions
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Old 02-07-05, 03:50 PM   #11
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Squad up took this one for his mad wordplay. his wordplay made up for his lack of personals. His multis were decent and structure was good. he was creative and strayed away from those garbage ass masturbation lines cause when he said on the ball i was sure that's what was comin and that would've lost my vote. Tunit's punches were good but a little too plain and expected like the niptuck line. He also could've did alot more with the name squad up. anyway rtv.

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Old 02-07-05, 04:08 PM   #12
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winner- tunit
close battle though

chea, uh i dont play... tell my boy to gimme my beam
wit a bigger "Scope" on it than Jimmy Iovine's
ya bars just wack, i eat em like lunch snacks
put lumps in ya shoulder blades bigger than hunch backs
t-unit could bump back, .....but if he does that
i'll dump that,oneclap put u in the dirt where the bugs at
Fuck that, u run ya jaws but neva win
ya a "new era" rapper cuz ya bars never "fitted" in
u first n im last? then its time for us to switch ends
tha punches "strike" harder than the hands on Big Ben
shit ends, u was never "fuckin str8" so ya dick bends
only time T was "on the ball" was Bic Pens......EASSSSY


squad's verse had some nice punches, flow was there, inner rhyming was there, lacked vocab though



yo i'll leave ya squad down like they got struck in a drive by SHOOTIN
you aint never gonna get no 'kicks'...unless footlockers 'RECRUITIN''
am bootin niguhs in the face an leavin em to ROT
so its deez rhymes you gotta worry about not gettin SHOT
we all know your NOT a thug or even part of a SQUAD
an i got artilary that'll leave you 'holy' as GOD
you an hookers are 2 peas in a POD, why? cuz ya both SUCK
steppin ta me, u gon need more than LUCK, cuz i'll rearrange ya facial features like NIP/TUCK
ya rhymes about as 'PHAT' as a supermodel on a DIET
so errr, now ima go librarian on ya ass n tell you ta 'BE QUIET'

Tunit- punches came stronger than squad's, flow was consistent, finisher was stronger, opener wasn't bad
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Old 02-07-05, 09:38 PM   #13
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hahahah ur joking right? neway uppin for votes holla at me
 
Old 02-08-05, 09:31 PM   #14
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hahahah ur joking right? neway uppin for votes holla at me
 
Old 02-09-05, 01:20 AM   #15
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Squad-Up

chea, uh i dont play... tell my boy to gimme my beam
wit a bigger "Scope" on it than Jimmy Iovine's
decent opener
ya bars just wack, i eat em like lunch snacks
put lumps in ya shoulder blades bigger than hunch backs
this was coo
t-unit could bump back, .....but if he does that
i'll dump that,oneclap put u in the dirt where the bugs at
coo
Fuck that, u run ya jaws but neva win
ya a "new era" rapper cuz ya bars never "fitted" in
i kinda wasnt feelin this but it's decent
u first n im last? then its time for us to switch ends
tha punches "strike" harder than the hands on Big Ben
kinda coo
shit ends, u was never "fuckin str8" so ya dick bends
only time T was "on the ball" was Bic Pens......EASSSSY
this was a nice closer

overall...this you had a pretty coo verse...punches hit kinda hard...some multies and a little wordplay...i kinda wasnt feelin one bar...but it was decent...and the rest of your verse was decent...coo verse...8.5/10

TuNit

yo i'll leave ya squad down like they got struck in a drive by SHOOTIN
you aint never gonna get no 'kicks'...unless footlockers 'RECRUITIN''
decent opener
am bootin niguhs in the face an leavin em to ROT
so its deez rhymes you gotta worry about not gettin SHOT
this was kinda weak cuz
we all know your NOT a thug or even part of a SQUAD
an i got artilary that'll leave you 'holy' as GOD
a little played but decent
you an hookers are 2 peas in a POD, why? cuz ya both SUCK
steppin ta me, u gon need more than LUCK, cuz i'll rearrange ya facial features like NIP/TUCK
kinda wasnt feelin this one...and it was a lil' streched
ya rhymes about as 'PHAT' as a supermodel on a DIET
so errr, now ima go librarian on ya ass n tell you ta 'BE QUIET'
this was kinda weak and basic...i've heard it toooo much

overall...your verse was aight...but you had a couple of basic, weak, and decent rhymes and shit...you gotta be a little bit more creative...you had a couple of good punches tho...multies were decent i guess...but work on your structure and punches a bit more...5.5/10
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