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Voted For: Invektive

Kid thinks hes ''Established' his bitch crew got him 'Brain Washed'
every ''shot'' he take is like Shaq guardin the hoop...Its ''SQUASHED''
…weak punch, wasn’t feelin it
Aimin lyrical Disses with which he ''Misses'' like A guy who cant 'Conseive'
I'd say you have ''People skills'' But i had a better conversation with 'Jeeves'
decent multi’s…punch didn’t really connect
Cause ya talents similiar to ya love life....Non Existant
All along you been kiddin yourself about your talent like a Meriage...
....But really its Distant !
uhhh…decent punch
My texts bring imminent death like a Blood Clot
Where as you Flatline like ya whole verse is typed with DOTS.............
weak closer…


Dopeman's mixed up on his location awareness..so realizing is what ima make ya
you confused...how could you be from the Dirty...when your avy's reppin Jamaica?
uhh…decent opener, punch was kinda weak, decent persona to it
dope..well we already know that you slow....so im gonna give you two clues next
fuckin hick first off..skip hip hop...second.....stick to country music and two steps
1st line was good, second line u lost it there
he stays steady spittin it and packin it.......so honestly we all aware he loves shit
dont worry bitch...you the man of it...so i know the dope impares your judgement
decent punch
Dopeman is truly a herb...the name speaks for itself..."impossible" is his "mission"
cause he couldnt 'beat me with words' if his verse was part of the Judicial system
haha…kinda good here

Overall one-sided vote here
Punches – Invektive took them, came hard thru the whole drop
Flow – Kinda of a tie here, but most Invek
Structure – Invektive
Personas – Tie…both had something true up in their drops
Multi’s – Dopeman…only 1 bar had em tho

But to me Invektive took this one…

This was feedback posted for Dopeman
 

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Voted For: Dopeman

i gotta give this to dopeman

Dopeman's mixed up on his location awareness..so realizing is what ima make ya
you confused...how could you be from the Dirty...when your avy's reppin Jamaica?
GOOD SET UP GOOD PUNCH(i dont know jamaica's pretty dirty)
dope..well we already know that you slow....so im gonna give you two clues next
fuckin hick first off..skip hip hop...second.....stick to country music and two steps
DECENT SET UP PUNCH LACKED A LITTLE BIT
he stays steady spittin it and packin it.......so honestly we all aware he loves shit
dont worry bitch...you the man of it...so i know the dope impares your judgement
SET UP WAS KINDA WEAK NICE PERSONAL
Dopeman is truly a herb...the name speaks for itself..."impossible" is his "mission"
cause he couldnt 'beat me with words' if his verse was part of the Judicial system
SET UP WAS GOOD BUT LACKED AT THE END PERSONAL MISSED

Kid thinks hes ''Established' his bitch crew got him 'Brain Washed'
every ''shot'' he take is like Shaq guardin the hoop...Its ''SQUASHED''
SET UP WAS GOOD SHAQ'S NOT A GREAT BLOCKER DECENT OPENER
Aimin lyrical Disses with which he ''Misses'' like A guy who cant 'Conseive'
I'd say you have ''People skills'' But i had a better conversation with 'Jeeves'
DECENT OPENER GOOD PUNCH
Cause ya talents similiar to ya love life....Non Existant
All along you been kiddin yourself about your talent like a Meriage...
....But really its Distant !
SET UP WAS GOOD PUNCH WAS GOOD
My texts bring imminent death like a Blood Clot
Where as you Flatline like ya whole verse is typed with DOTS...........................
GOOD SET UP GOOD PUNCH GREAT CLOSER

i think this was a close battle but i gotta give it to dopeman cause invek's didn't really flo well wit me. Dopeman's structure was ragged but other then that i think it was better.

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