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OrEo da cookie 02-15-05 11:23 PM

get at the battle in my sig............................................... ...........

TonyTone 02-16-05 06:17 PM

damn, dropped a half ass verse in like 10 minutes n im still gonna win, pffftttt

Blackmage 02-16-05 09:34 PM

Voted For: Makeveli Trained

Makeveli Trained takes this one

Turn ya average drops 2 breakfast, u aint winning w/ ya played ass lines
I’ll collapse his whole spine cuz Notice just a miner threat like a lack of Coal Sites
wORDPLAY GOOD PUNCH WAS GOOD SET UP WAS DECENT
GOOD OPENER OVERALL
When it's trouble he runs n brags about skills he hasn't harnessed yet
So I told em ta Eat His Heart Out n tha bitch quickly Starved 2 Death
SET UP WAS DECENT AND THE PUNCH WAS GOOD
You'll get tossed regardless, I promise, even if u drop ur hardest
Honestly, I'll still set this Herbicide (herb aside) like cautious Farmers
SET UP NOTHIN SPECIAL BUT ONCE AGAIN THE PUNCH GOOD
Been close to a year n ya games still wack, ya girls jus ya buddy dude
Cuz tha closest ya came to havin a Date with her wuz in ya Study Group
BAD LINE WASN'T FEELIN SET UP OR PUNCH
Your a bitch, n i swear ill expose u worse than the Clinton affair
Cuz ya punches cant even be called Misses, they not even Hittin the Air
SET UP AND PUNCH GOOD GOOD CLOSER
consistently good punches, lacked structure though but it flo'd and if you fix the structure it'll be raw

Aight Listen Ta Wat I Gotta Say
This Aint No Beef Or A Fight Cuz You Would Never Win Any Way ........your
BAD LINE, SET UP AND PUNCH WERE BOTH WEAK
Lyrics Dont Make Sence
Another Fake Hustler From Tha Past Tence
ANOTHER BAD LINE SET UP AND PUNCH WERE WEAK

FROM HERE I'M JUST GUESSING WHAT THE STRUCTURE WAS

Man Dont Make Me Trip
You Just Another Fuckin Fan With A Loose Ass Grip
Cock Suckin Basket Case Momas Boy Still Suckin On Momas Tit
SET UP WAS WEAK PUNCHES WERE WEAK
wat Ya Think I Couldent Tell Ya I Was Razed In Jail
But I Just Got Paroll Now Im Out On Bail
You Muthafucker S Will Never Catch Me Cuz Im To Fast For You To Bitch Ass Im A Watch You Rot In Hell
SET UP WAS DECENT I GUESS NO PUNCH THOUGH THEN WEAK
I'll Be Back .......yep For You An Ya Motha Fuckin Girfriend Too
theres No Tellin Wat Ill Do
This Mabey Your Last Chance Ta Say Anything Cuz You Just
Got Screwed.................
WEAK SET UP AND WEAK PUNCH BAD CLOSER

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TonyTone 02-19-05 08:41 PM

uppin, one more vote

SUPERVILLAIN 02-20-05 08:03 AM

^^^UPPIN' FOR THE CRHYMIE MAK!!! lets get these votes in people.


...the super...........c.s.

TonyTone 02-22-05 07:30 PM

uppin kids one more vote

Da_Throwdest 02-22-05 07:59 PM

Voted For: Makeveli Trained

this was an 1-sided battle the whole way out:
opener: m.t.
vocab: m.t.
structure: m.t.
multis: m.t.
closer: m.t.
m.t. wins my vote cuz he had the betta vocab in this battle; but both of y'all need 2 elevate in ur rhymes & work on ur wordplay; convicted u don't need 2 stretch ur lines
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