Voted For: Buck.Shot

punches-BS
persnals-BS
stuck-none
flow-MJ
metals-BS

BS take this came harded didnt rhyme to good mj was weak had a fe wlittl;e pucnhes in there didnt hit hard rhymed good though BS wins came hard with punches and persnals

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Voted For: Buck.Shot

do i really have 2 explain?



IP:

Why you think they call this kid 'MJ-Green?'
Eyes like a ''Frog''.. trynna type rhymes ''Glued ta the Screen''
So peachy-keen too get his Verse Correct
Even ya ''Ghost''writer was labelled an ''Unidentified Object''
Flows like a ''Collect-Call'' Causing ''No Charges''
If ya wanna ''Cum-Hard'' Try 'Penis Enlargers!'
Ya lack Skill, Creativity, Wit, Among many Other Things
Cause ya come ''Softer'' than the ''Titties'' ya Mother-Brings

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I've been gone for a while, but it feels too long ago,
You take tips from 8 mile and end up as 'no show'
'Buck.Shot', change your name to 'Fuck Slot'
Cuz gays spend to fuck your ass alot
I'm a weapon, your dead, one stab of the knife,
I murked you so bad i thought i'd take your life
Was like 'Jerry Springer' cuz over me your mom and sis were fighting
You've been knocked out so bad ass look like it got hit by 'Lightning'

thats a good enuff explanation rite there, werd

LOL ^^^
Thanks, i think?
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Voted For: Buck.Shot

V/buck.shot.....he came wit consistent punchs an good personals also good structure i liked first line....mj ur verse lacked original punchs u had some played lines an they werent consistent i seen better from u nohate....RETURN THE FAVOR
opner=b
closer=b
Structure=Tie
punchs=b
personals=b
overall=Buck.shot