Voted For: rooq
i gotta go with rooq....heres what i see
assassin, your structure was crap, i dunno, you gotta organize it better, your lines were fucking continuing and running all over the place, but aside from that, you did have nice flow, weird, haha, but your punches were pretty weak, and you didnt really have any personals in there, poor vocab, nothing special with wordplay....gotta come harder next time, stay consistent, diss your oponent as much as you can....
rooq, not bad man, had some good creativity, bustin out some multies, i like that, and you had some punches that hit nicely, same with one personal, i think....yeah, some lines seemed like fillers, but you had some nice connecting lines, good vocab and wordplay, but just try not to repeat words in your verse, word, not a bad verse, you took this easy
v/rooq.....if ya could, drop and honest vote in my battle with kid, or chowie chow, word.....good battle
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