Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-11-05 at 07:22 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

AssAsInS-eVolve! has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-09-05 10:48 AM.

rooq has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-09-05 02:29 PM.

I'm Sick, Son, i'll rip you wit Inscriptions/
you won't evolve no more when hit with Extinction/
i spit vicous scripts, make convicts look Nondescript/
Man, Forfit, cos you couldn't amount to "shit" in Manure-Pits/
your style is old n decrepid, and punchz stay unconnected/
you got no "lines"...but i'll leave creases in yer forehead/
so add talent to yer wishlist, or go find a rent-a-diss/
if Darwin met evolve, he'd of become a creationist/
i'm out Classin Assasin, i'll leave him with Cracked-Limbs/
so Pack-In with tha Rappin....cos you'll always Lack-Wins...

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yA Life, u should be concerned fa dat...this learner is wack
n this like 1st time smokers coz he'll get burn then (turn ta ash)!!(think about it)
This dudes a clown, his been living in a box..getting a bit big for his socks n this battles like empty guns coz u wont wont win so wos da point in giving it a shot!!!!!???
couple a shots i'll blast in ya chest...this gunna have lasting effects..so get grasping ya techs coz battlin me's like asking for hearing aids as ya just "asking fa DEAF!!!!

dq this punk he went over 6 lines............................................. .

it says 6 to Unlimited-lines...
learn to read before Tryin-to-Rhyme..........bitch

j/k i meant to set it up for 10 lines but left in tha default option.

anywayz, uppin for votes

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Voted For: rooq

V/Rooq....he get votes my vote cause he came wit hard hitting punchs he had personals an good wordplay wit structure....assasin u had some good lines but ur structure was off an u lacked consistent diss's...RETURN THE FAVOR...
opener=R
closer=r
structure=r
punchs=r
personals=r
overall=Rooq

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Voted For: rooq

AAsiasin or w/e
you were weak weak allaround i didnt feel anything you wrote it was allw eak the punches didnt hit it was blah

Rooq
better vocab was better punches were weak but its all better anyway

RTF in my battle with AMH links in the sig

up...

i don't have enuff posts to vote yet...so i might hafta go talk shit in tha forums

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i'm too picky wit mah shit-talkin....still 2 posts short

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wtf u tlking bout my structures fucked?? its just coz all u lil noobs use the same fucking box structure. If u follow the multies like ya suppose ta u would c da punches u prik. If i spit that to myself the verse builds up to the punch, so know a bit about different structres b4 ya ass starts hating. Lets go n vote on his battle now n c how better than us he is LMFAO!!

stop sleepin on dis yer cunts...get yer votin socks on. chea

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i am going to kill tha next person who doesn't vote on this battle....





....right?

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Voted For: rooq

rooq - took this battle easily...you had a somewhat deecent structure here with way harder punches and personals. You had a good flow in your verse and you had some good vocab use. you had some kick ass multis in there that made you win this battle easily one sided. Good verse man....8/10

AssAsInS-eVolve! - wasn't really feelin this verse too much man. you structure is wacked out. fix that right now and you will come a lot harder. also your lines seemed to have forced rhymes in my opinion and it made your verse look worse. Elevate your structure and flow and punches and you'll be better..

v/rooq

RTF on the link in my sig please