This was feedback posted for Spektikul
 

Checking the polls..................................

Upping..........

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ditto ^^^

VOTE BITCHES!

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Upping. Again. Motha fuckas. Vote. Dammit. Upping.

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222 Views, 0 votes, 1 wack site.

fuckin vote.

This was feedback posted for C.A.L.I
 

This was feedback posted for Spektikul
 

ok...........

c.a.l.i - you had an ok verse....wordplay was coo punches were coo......multies were there too....it wasnt really a good verse...it just seemed ordinary....and your structer sucks....and that rapper/wrapper shit was just dumb.....and so was the slim shady line...but u said shady slim lmao....seamed like u was trying to hard and u steppeed on your own foot........no hate tho....

Spek - your verse was good....nice punches...personals....i like the exercise line....not really any multies...but coo wordplay....ummm....your rhyme scheme was better than cali's......and your structer was way better i didnt have to look hard to read and understand....and none were forced lines they just flowed....good job...

vote/spek


well thats if i could vote...but i just found out i cant...so i'll leave this as feed

lol spek have this closed well reopen with a lesser post count and redrop cuz neither of us really even tried for this

Ill just get strobe to lower post count, sall taken care of.

ling posted feedback his vote dont count spek otheriwse th other kids vote should count

Upping...................

Voted For: Spektikul

CALI:

Thats not minutes to drop thats steps im beyind um!!
Stay on my dick he a good rapper/wrapper......
too bad hes encasing a condom!!
^^rapper/wrapper lines are wack but decent attempt 4/10
Was never no hate i always thought youd shine in time
But you aint never elevate even ya avys pen is behind in times
^^good personal 8/10
One of a kind?.......nope!!trash textcees a dime a dozen
Ya lyrics is dope.........
with more cuts then holloween pumpkins!!{1}
^^hot metaphors in this bar 8/10
Pardon me munchkin this a tall order you small package
Big things in small sizes.......
ya verse holds a immeasurable amount of wackness
^^decent 6/10
If our words backflipped then youd defintaly win
So trading votes is 'Shady'..........
but without um ya chances is just 'Slim'
^^good punch and meta 7/10
Fuck him hes not even decent spek you far from a vet bastard
You just another 'Rook' i removed from the 'Board'......
call me the chessmaster!!
^^decent closer nice meta 7/10

overall: 40/70 (57%)

Spektikul:

This time around your rhyme is bound to hit me where ya wanna
Only way youll ever spit 'dope' shit, is in a topical on marijuana
^^played concept 4/10
This is a one sided rally provided Cali's dickriders dont contribute
Thinks he's phat, check all the links this kat needs to distibute
^^decent punch, but not a personal cuz that could be used on anoyone who uses links 5/10
Ive read his battles before, either shorter or to each border
He could only consider himself above me ... in alphebetical order
^^good punch 7/10
This fag brags about how many legs hes opened, something I cant stand
Are you sure her name wasnt Palm-a-la, someone also known as your hand
^^wack 3/10
How you supposed to offend me, you worked at Wendys and that shits sad
Im battling a twenty-four year old wanksta thats old enough to be my dad
^^decent 5/10
Your audio is gaudy yo, You aint rapping in ya mic...you just abuse it
Have you ever heard of talent? You should look for it so you can use it
^^dope 9/10
Once I win you can bet this vets rep will be swept into the trash can
Cali's such a fuckin 'pussy', before we battled he got a 'cat-scan'
^^dope punch dope meta 9/10
This battle aint a total waste, Ill get excersice once I pound through
But I could get more excerice, if I were to actually run around you
^^lmfao dope shit again 8/10
Rap Verse is ya life, so I will try not to lyrically heat-you-up
An keep talkin shit on computer, on the street I could beat-you-up.
^^wack lol 3/10

overall: 53/90 (59%)

Vote: Spektikul

C.A.L.I you shoulda used 1 more decent line and you would have won, probably the wackest i have seen you come...

Return the favor with an honest vote on this battle... no one votes anymore so it will be appreciated, dont rtf i wont vote on anymore of youre battles and i vote more than anyone :thumbup:

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