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03-17-05, 11:26 PM | #1 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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Kamikazee vs FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
IP: 3240 794D
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what was it...7 bars ? No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate Votes No D/R Votes Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 03-17-05 at 11:56 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. This Battle Is Now Closed
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03-17-05, 11:28 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 3240 794D
FlOw InTeLLiGeNt has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-17-05 11:28 PM.
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03-17-05, 11:28 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Kamikazee has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-17-05 11:28 PM.
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03-17-05, 11:31 PM | #4 | |||
Tha Truth
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Dont get shit twisted....... Yo dis fool really actin like and claimin to be a real old school Vet, Hes got so many haters im suprised he aint recieved his death thret Damn i spit so much knowledge, Should call me a Lyrical Genius, Dis motha fucka is all over strobe's dick, like pubs on his damn penis Dawg u collaberate words in such a way that is an annoyment, Even your mom will admit ur rhymes is nothin but a disappoinment I'm to much for you cuzz, like slow children in advanced classes, You couldn't 'combine killer lines' if you spitted 'poiseness gasses I use a shit load of methods to figure ways to destroy u bitches, Turning da lights on and off' is the only time you 'flippin switches Down to get banned for because all da coments i speak is irrelevant, Flow Intelligent? Flow u cant even stay on beat cuz u aint Intelligent Check it I done merked dis kat once 5-2 dont make me fool u again,<http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165754> ^^True facts, Change ur name to MakeBelieve cuz all u do is pretend And dats wuts up.......Pz
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03-17-05, 11:44 PM | #5 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 3240 794D
Aiight you think you got me ? HAHAHAHA noob get wrecked
Check it.... Ya verse wont fly, You a kamikazee so you should hit the building
Aint got a can, so protect yourself before i kick your children And your garbage rhymes are honestly considered handicapped Thats why you gonna "stay around waste" just like a fanny pack I know flow intelligent lines are the only thing you can throw back you get no slack, so how about we play a game Of Tic Tac Toe Tag This guy's like white folk during slavery, he aint gettin the strap Ya rhymes like quaterbacks, after you pitch em i be hittin the sack You can defeat me? What are you, Some sort of lame prophet Cuz i dont know where you cumin from like John Wayne Bobbit Take my dick and get off it, bitch That would be much quicker Cuz im holdin chrome, while you Carry-Wood like the cubs pitcher Kamikazee, Im better, Just remember before you spoil your luck I'll treat ya verse like Prince Charles, So watch it get royally fucked _______ Explanations for those who dont know 1. A kamikazee is a person who commits suicide by means of terroism, IE. running his plane into a building 2. Kick the can is a game, i have no can.. so i kick his nuts just some basic shit 3-4. Garbage rhymes/waste.. same thing. Fanny packs go around your waiist/"waste" 7-8. White people didnt get beat in slavery, his verse is like a quaterback, after he pitches it i hit the sack. in football you hit the sack as in hit the QB, but when he rhymes i hit the sack as in bed. 10. John wayne bobbit got his dick chopped off, so i dont know where he is coming from... you get it 12. Carey Wood is the cubs pitcher. easy 14. Im fuckin his verse up, prince charles is royalty, get royally fucked long ass explanations yall better vote now after having me explain everything
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03-18-05, 05:41 AM | #6 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: CF97 F3A6
Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
This wuz a nice batte, my proppz goes out ta yall both in diz here mayne i thought kamikaze had da better stucture, shit wuz like a box almost lol, but flow had da better punchs, some of em wuz sick ta da core, like that cubs pitcher, dat line waz so sick it wuz almost AWFUL hahahahaha nall udiz wuz a much better performance from flow hiz creativity an punz got him da win |
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03-18-05, 09:05 AM | #7 | |||||
...fuck life.
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IP: C025 3ECB
Voted For: Kamikazee
FI-good:nice verse, liked the punches and werdplay especially, good opener too bad:didnt really like the closer, couldve ahd some multies, up the vocab a tad bit 2 fav line:3-4, werdplay is fucking crazy Kami-good:nice werdplay and punches throughout the verse, good structure, nuice vocab,good ending bad:didnt like the opener, coodve used multies, fav line:line 4, nice job there breakdown: opener:FLow closer:Kami flow:tie punches:Kami (had them throughtout) werdplay:Flow structure:tie multies:tie vocab:Kami overal-very nice battle, toguh decision here, it was close v/kamikazee rtf...link in sig |
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03-18-05, 09:08 AM | #8 | ||||
I walk & walk over you
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This was feedback posted for FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
IP: 645B D439
LMAO@ THIS BATTLE
Good job FLow Uppin and checking the polls
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03-18-05, 12:23 PM | #9 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 0825 899A
morse code that was a d/r vote like a motherfucker.
multies tie. show me one multi he had punches kami? count up the punches i had one in every single line mrse cod eyou a faggot and you knopw thats a bs vote what did he vote on your battle so you voted for him on this one word to me yall noobs is crazy stupid.
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03-18-05, 01:50 PM | #10 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
very good battle kamikazee-overall nice verse. you had a nice personal at the end. good closer. your opener was great & was hitting. your flow was good. there was nothing wrong with your structure. the only thing i didnt like about your verse was the fact that you used that flow intelligent. it just fucked up ur whole verse in my opinion. overall 9/10 Flow Intelligent-opener was just ok. wasn't better than Kamikazee's opener. i like the wordplay all the way thru ur verse. you had a good flow and structure was even. no streched out lines or nothing of that sort. your closer was in my opinion betta then Kam's though. and you had plenty of personals. overall 9.5/10 a kinda even battle i thought. i based it on originality and creativity. Kam had some good lines but that bar about flow intelligent really killed it so im voting for Flow Intelligent |
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03-18-05, 01:52 PM | #11 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
oh yeah make sure 2 return the favor in my battle against morse code
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=182327 |
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03-18-05, 03:57 PM | #12 | |||||
...fuck life.
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IP: 28AD 5545
^lmao, naw, that wasnt no fucking d/r vote dumbass, just cuz i voted for the other person shit, i voted for wut i thgouht was better so dont get mad, check all my damn battles, he never voted on one, so wus good, check yoself b4 you speak fool, now stfu,
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03-18-05, 04:13 PM | #13 | |||
Tha Truth
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IP: 3240 794D
Yea no hate but y u bitchin u up 2-1.....so stfu...........Pz and uppin dis shit close battle right here
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03-19-05, 12:00 AM | #14 | |||
Tha Truth
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IP: 0825 899A
Uppin Dis Shit Dis Shits Close Dawg For Real......~1~
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03-19-05, 12:13 AM | #15 | |||||||
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
Allright, this was a good battle... FlOw InTeLLiGeNt - Good drop man. Good structure brought a good enjoyable/readable flow to it. The Punches were solid and made me laugh. Very good verse, you came really hard with very good vocabulary and wordplay.... Take my dick and get off it, bitch That would be much quicker Cuz im holdin chrome, while you Carry-Wood like the cubs pitcher ^ Very Good Line.... Don't really need anything to improve on....8/10 Kamikazee - Good drop as well. You had a good structure with good flow as well. Your punches didn't come as hard as flows though. You had good punches but you didn't use wordplay as good as he did and you didn't use any personals that hit to hard. Most of your rhymes seemed really forced as well...6/10 Vote: Flow Intell |
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