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so ill. loved it.. loved it... loved it...
so many good things to say about this piece, word.


i gotta collab idea. get at my pm page... pc.

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Love how the story progressed and how you managed to portray the situation in such a vivid, emotional yet powerful way.

Kept vocab quite simple which I liked because too high vocab can sometimes really affect the content of the piece but that wasn't the case here because you find a good balance.
Was also definately feeling your flow and I absolutely LOVED the twist in the ending.

I thought the guy had accepted the fact she was pregnant and then he does kill himself, that was a nice ending in my opinion. You kept switching back and forth between emotions and I'm sure as hell liking that.

Great read and made me think about some stuff actually (<- if you can do that, you know this was damn good)

DQ

This was really good 10/10 no doubt very thoughtfull and like evry1 sed hit emotions RTF plz

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^^ The fuck nigga? Stop stealing my style.......................
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Lol j/p

You made up for the shoddy spelling with the deepest shit I'v read from you.

A real Em/Nas/Dyslexic mix there.

Deep.

that first verse is how i feel right now...

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hol on ..... Lemme Go and get some Pussy ....................................Aii Now im bout to cry

10/10 mayne

terrific Piece .... keep up the good work

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Thanks for the lack of feed,preciate it.