For the Baby(PLEASE READ IT ALL)

Waddup girl...its been too long since I saw you..
a 3 day weekend without a phone to call you..
that was tourture girl,but I was probably aloof..
but I love you girl,my heart says property of you.
Your friend said that funny shit,like I'm too hot to be with you.
but the day before the weekend,the one on top of me was you.
I haven't seen you since then,your friend got for me some news..
aint tell me nothin,cept it'll break our sovergnty in two..
I don't believe that,there's nothin that I can't settle with you..
this is true love,what we got here is never a fluke..
don't be scared baby you can tell me the news..
unless its that you fucked around and nailed you a dude..
I'm playin girl nothin gonna keep me from marryin you..
you fuckin perfect,many tried to break us up but nothing's workin..
but you seem to be avoidin me...is something hurtin?
don't worry,Ill be holding your hand if somethings surface.


(Chorus=girlfriend through email)
"Hey baby..I think I might be pregnant...please don't be mad..
I'm sorry...I'm sooooo sorry...love you mel..."

I got the messege on the net that you mailed today..
about the baby which you didn't even tell me to my face
but I'm okay...wait..that was a lie..I'm fuckin scared out of my mind!!
wait you could of cheated...we'll find out if its mine!!!
Wait..I'm trippin aint I?I aint even the same guy..I'm like an A.I.
sorry but this..alot of stuff to stuff a Dude...
I gotta rebuffer and recover how much I'm in love with you..
but you gotta wonder after lovin we gotta suffer too....right?
OH MY GOD GIRL!!!we close to creating a new life!?!?!?
I'm 14! he'll be 2 when I'm just about old enough to drive..
MY bad,MY loss,I'm sorry all this is my fault..
you had school too...and I HAD to take that night off..
and remove your nightgown...now..I gota see your face...
its just jitters I'm havin..everything we'll be okay...
why won't you come see me?We can be a real couple..
no matter what baby you my life..I still love you..

(Chorus=girlfriend through email)
"Hey Mel good news..I mixed the signs up..I guess blue meant
I'm NOT pregnant afterall! isn't that great?Well the reason I didn't
come see you is cause I was gettin implants Lol..well come over
and this time we'll use protection,peace luv ya boy ,xoxoxoxo"

Hey baby good news..I'm ready for birthin...
you gonna have to call me..since my email isn't workin..
anyway..I got life insurance..and I have a right to do it...
since I got a fake I.D. so now I'm licenced to it..
and I got double the dough,since I am a monority..
this gonna sound crazy..but I know my priorties..
and sometimes we have to do things,that we never liked..
and these things,can give us money,and a better life..
and right now,I don't even got a nickle on me.
But I'm in my dark basement..and I equiped a pistol on me..
and its thrusted against my head,I'm bout to be cut with the lead..
I tried usin a knife..but I fucked up..and my knuckles bled..
anyway..don't forget that...I did this to save you..
I love you girl..and to my baby I have names to name you..
if you a boy ya name is melvin,a daughter? call her brittany..
well I did this to be a good father..don't bother to miss me..

(click,click,*gunshot*)

(Chorus=girlfriend through email)
"where you at Mel I been waiting forever"

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Whoa nice shit mane.......Lyrics were decent and the emotion hit hard. Dope piece here.

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A shit was hot nice structure was feelin the flow I like the hook was e-mails she sent you that was hot nice piece fam I'd give it a 8.5/10

btw repay the favor link in sig!

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Tony Green's Soundclick

omfg.. this actually like put tears to my eyes.. this was a dope piece.. the first verse was lacking i mean dont get me wrong its better then anything else u'll read on here.. but for u i coulda seen better.. but after that it just picked up soo fast.. and it was coming heavy the whole way thru.. the rhyme scheme was very nice.. the emotion was what sent this over the edge.. this is definitely top 3 pieces i've ever read on here.. and one of the other ones is written by you too.. this was a great piece.. definitely hall of fame material.. pz fam..

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Caught my emotion good shit homie good flow good structure......i like da hole damn thing......Pz i give it a 9/10......RTF link in my sig

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Kamikazee

[B][CENTER]Tha Truth

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i'm tellin' you that was really dope 9.5/10 keep it going that was hot nice topic too

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THE ART OF WAR

man, you really got this down nicely. OMG this really got me thinkin'. I loved this shit, man. really dope man. good shit. 9.5/10

plz return the favor i get slept on.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181257


but good shit homie. pc one

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Whoa...very good piece. Straight emotion, great story, very fuckin dope. Whoa,,,I am flabergasted about this. Not much to say other than straight ill shit.

Whoa.

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Soundclick
NEW Myspace

yeah tahts wassup this shit was nice fam...

Topic / Lyrics / Flow pattern everything was illmatic and ill at it yah' mean

haha well anyways HOlla

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Taj-He-Spitz... You lookin at a problem!

real shit deph...nice to see my nigga comin back wit sumthin on key right now...got me wantin to do a deep track...guess we can talk mo on AIM...hol up real quick my nig

-DB

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GET ON AIM NIGGA!

-DB

lmfao

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