aiight this is a song i'm doin' for audio track. goes to "Canabitch" beat my eminem. enjoy niggas. Jus jokin' around. A diss to some ugly girl I know at my college who mad annoying.

So the other day I'm sittin' down in english class
She makes a noise, annoyed I then ask
What the fuck is the bitch doin' in this fuckin' room?
She looks like a witch, so I hit her wit a broom
Keep doin' it, hitting her right on the money
I keep on goin' like the energizer bunny
It's non-stop hitting, bitch take that, take that
Hit her on face, bitch, face slap, face slap
On the ground, as her face fall flat
Stab a beak in her head like a baseball cap
Face the fuckin' facts, you're wack, nobody likes you
Yo brother is the only who'd ever go and wife you
Mrs. Lowe don't care she at her desk
While all eyes on me as I try and break this bitches neck
Fuck, I gotta pee, don't you move, I won't be long
I would do it in yo mouth, but fuck, it would look too wrong

(chorusx2)
Now, let me tell you 'bout the Ugly Duckling
(who?) An ugly girl who's used to suckin'
(at what?) At life, at dick, I think not
And unlike the story she will never turn hot

So I came back into the room, ready to play
To find out the annoyin' lil bitch ran away
She wanna test my skill, this bitch is a hoe
I go and ask Will, which way did she go?
He points to the door, to the exit fuck
I say thanks, but... Texas suck
I say peace out, and I'm out of the room
Feelin' kinda heavy I throw out the broom
Oh, shit, I hit some senior in the nuts
Fuck, who cares, the fuckin' faggot should have ducked
Speakin' bout a duck, that's how the kid walks
Fuckin' wack shit, even dumber when he talks
(anyways) Why she runnin', man, I did the bitch a favor
Now the bitch screaming, like she goin' into labor
But that wouldn't happen, never ever, not later
So she got a pussy that looks like a lifesaver
All this hard work, tryin' to think of jokes
I take a lil break, sip down some cherry coke
Then I take it slow, back on flow, I'm out to get her
All that damage I did to her face, it made her look better

(chorusx2)
Now, let me tell you 'bout the Ugly Duckling
(who?) An ugly girl who's used to suckin'
(at what?) At life, at dick, I think not
And unlike the story she will never turn hot

Ok, third verse let's go, bitch
Where the fuck you at? Gotta find your ass quick
Put an end to this shit, bitch, you really need to die
Like NSYNC yo, you go, bye... bye.. bye
Do what I say, hoe, don't ask why
Oh, shit hold up, a hot girl jus passed by
Hey girl, I'd really like a piece of yo pie
Fuck, shit I gotta go, I'll call you later at 5
so.. I'm standin' right there as I'm gettin' her number
All of a sudden, there she go, (vroom) like the road runner
grab the piece of paper, and I yell "See you later!!"
Fuck this bitch, man, I'm the hoe exterminator
Now I'm really pissed off, lettin' out steam
Oh, wait that was fart, jus kidding, you kno what I mean
Back to the scene, headin' off into the action
She got it backwards, like fict or faction
Dead end, haha, I got her trapped
Then from the bathroom, I hear a big splat
Fuck, what was that? Who the hell's takin' a shit
Betta go check it out, it betta not be that bitch
I kick the stall open, oh my god, it's the bitch
I try to close my eyes, too late, I see it
Oh, my god, what the fuck, what the fuck, that's sick
Holy shit, what the fuck, the bitch she got a dick!!
Oh shit, quick, I throw her down to the ground
Start kickin' her, then I punch her all around
I slap the bitch and then, slap the bitch again
You're wack, it's Stat bitch, talk that shit again
It's all over, she ain't make a sound
I feel like David, bringin' Goliath down
Next thing I kno the bitch is yellin' "Pay attention"
Oh, fuck, it was dream... "Detention!"

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this was sum funny shit, nice flow homeboy, keep it comin

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www.soundclick.com/dollaback

haha thanks, man. props for being first dude to leave me feed on RV. appreciate it. You need me to drop feed on yo shit jus holla man. but pc one. and up

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LOL!!
Flow was good
topic was unusual..
but i was thinkin bout the ugly ducklin few days ago
an i looooved this shit here dogg hahah, 7/10

keep steppin ya game up an keep the creativity comin, always good ta see somthin diffrent lol

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haha thanks, man. Jus i hate that girl sooo much. lol but appreciate it man. pc uppin'

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Lmao... Maan boooy...

Well it should sound better in audio then i read in the thread - and i didn't know the girl.. so daaamn

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Taj-He-Spitz... You lookin at a problem!

haha yup I jus finished recording it on audio today. so shortly it'll be up in songs sections but thanks for feed. upp...

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upping niggas......... c'mon now

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this was different in much aspects but yeah very funny i liked it...vocab was nice...structure was on point...overall it was a 10/10 afta me looking ova it homey keep it up
make sure 2 return the favor in my battle:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=180742

thx yo uppin' for feed.............................

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structure was great flow was good as alwayz vocab was dere it was good could of been betta overall it was a great open mic unusaul but it was great 8/10

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