not bad. should have extended it a little more. but not bad. pc

right You know how hard it is to write stuff like that?

i liked it, except for when you said nerdy geeks......haha, keep up

she likes it when I say stuff that make her laugh but yeah uppin.

uppin this shit.

[i]This was an okay drop, Could have been better..
Stucture was alittle off but,still readable...
You had lots of feeling and nice emotions..
This was a good read, next time just elevate on your structure
and you'll be good ,

overall keep it up

You and Katrina have the same style of writing............... odd...

what you mean. I help her out. heh so don't get any ideas about her being imaginary.

uppin this shit....

uppin this shit.

your girls verse was blah yo, yours was alright, I dont like love songs though, soooo corny, but anyways, it was good, nice meta's, lined were a little stretched, but overall it was decent, not bad, good stuff, 7/10

rtf in the sig

nice drop...here's wut stood out to me

-the flow was decent enough...it fell off in areas but nobody's perfect
-there wasnt much raw emotion but everything that was said made sense
-the hook was fire...use that in a audio or somethin
-"Like a nerdy geeks grades my love for you is progressin": not a good comparrison to be honest....try somethin like " emotions take over when i see you i cant control my affection"...yet again it did make sense tho.

overall i give this one a 6/10 keep droppin and RTF in my OM called Dream or reality.1.

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I liked this.. alot actually. Legand ASL!? PM me iight...

late

sweft

legend this was a solid drop fam, real emotion, you can tell
this meant something to you, similies were koo n ya flow was
on key for the most part.....definately a good piece fam...stay up...