nice drop fam......this was a piece on the real you coulda used a lil betta structra but its w/e man i liked this piece been doin ya thing....so keep it up fam :thumbup:

Thanxx fam niggaz hate cause I rap about gangsta shit and I aint tryinn to be no net thug but thats just my life style!

Uppin!

Yeah man your structure was off a Lil' and at first I didnt know what I was readin', a poem or a rap, You stayed on topic and the flow was iight. You need a lil more emo in it though.. what beat was you writin' to.. over all it was worth the read and i give it like, 6.9/10 keep this up famm..
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No beat just a flow I came up with and yeah my structure was off but Tony Green aint never been good with structure!