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04-03-05, 01:59 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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"90 Days"
IP: 0825 899A
Verse1: Tony Green It was a hot summer day and I was kicking it with gangsta's. Ran out in humble park rolling chasing paper. Know we keep the best of Green so you know I'm smoking. Lot of niggaz out here clean so you know I'm scoping. Tony Green aint with that bull shit of niggaz being broken. Waiting for a bitch to pull it thats what I'm hoping. Spotted me a nigga candy painted 100 spoking. Sippin on his liquor with the blow face off and cocaine. Bullets they will burn like the lava that is molting. You victims that have learned to resist will end up getting you croaking. Always keep a thang and some gloves never knowing. When I'll have to call my clique pull it out and pok'em. All up in ya grill hear the shit you just spoken. I know that you scared but lets not get your momma moping. Snatched him out the car hit the gas that boy sniffing. He okay right now but out his head a patch is missing. Hook:[repeat 2x] 90 days in a Audie Home That Aint Shit! 3 bags and a firearm That Aint Shit! Bogus Tags and a Missed Warrant That Aint Shit! Police all at my momma home That Aint Shit! Verse2:Tony Green Working on the block feeling hot my mans got the chrome. No stones ran off at the mouth my mans sent him home. Its alot of tricks alot of hoes alot lords alot of foes. Rolling with alot of thickness thats why I bust the troj. Its alot of hatting alot of shacking alot of facking perce taking. Detective rating tryin to solve a case like they Perry Mason. You can get your skull split blood drip don't fuck with. Got something on my waist a bitch nigga tuck this.(PAW PAW) I'm making hits top that, (PAW PAW) rob that. Got niggaz sitting on your head like a top hat. Yeah nigga top that, from the CHI the streets is mine. Want whats mine I up that nine, so don't even try a waste of time. Hook:[repeat2x] 90 days in a Audie Home That Aint Shit! 3 bags and a Firearm That Aint Shit! Bogus Tags and a missed Warrant That Aint Shit! Police all at my momma home That Aint Shit! Based on a True Story! |
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04-03-05, 05:47 PM
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Cus I Jus Ma$fit Dis Shit
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IP: 4506 4E5B
lmfao fam...good to see u puttin out sumthin like dis...gotta be one of ya best pieces...8/10 4real...we gotta collab again fam...1
-DB uppin for my nigga t.green
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04-03-05, 08:12 PM
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The story goes. Bill, B.
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IP: 606D F99A
I like this, it was hot...structure was a little off here and there but it was all gravy train lol...rtf bruh...kepp at it...8/10
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04-04-05, 07:35 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
Thanxx Tony Green uppin!
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04-04-05, 10:16 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
This was decent, could be better
Your structure was pretty messed up , need to learn how to match up your bars.. Learn to use feeling when you write, and show emotions.. Overall this was a decent drop, you can do better just stay at it and you'll be str8 Ps  rop a link to an OM' you have left feedback on or this will be closed
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04-05-05, 05:53 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
^^^Thanxx fam uppin
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=185002 |
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04-05-05, 06:11 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: C98D ED66
wassup tony,werd pretty cool song here,why dont you do audio? or if you do well put it in audio lol,structure was cool,flow was off sometimes,vocabs was cool,nice drop man,oh the reason i didnt diss noone when i was in NOK before they kick me out is becuz i didnt have beef with no one
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04-05-05, 06:20 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
Well shit you sho got alot now but n e way stay up and aint got the equipment for audio!
Uppin! |
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04-05-05, 07:32 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: 0825 899A
Tony Green uppin!
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04-06-05, 07:26 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: 0825 899A
Tony Green uppin!
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04-08-05, 10:52 AM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: 7A52 73B1
uppin fo feed!!
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04-08-05, 09:35 PM
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Loyalty proven
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IP: C7EE 5FCD
dont know if this is the one u wanted me to leave feed on but here it goes.
this was some nice shit man. ya vocab and shit went well together. im not sayin they hatin, cause they aint but thats why i dont like text. how u gone say someones shit didnt flow right if u cant here what they sayin? but yea man topic was nice and ya flow went wit the topic good. hook was aight man. all in all this was a good track. i'd give it about an 8/10
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04-08-05, 09:42 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: 0825 899A
Thanxx fam-o uppin!
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04-08-05, 10:20 PM
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Tha 1st member of S.W.A
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IP: B525 44D9
lol, nice shit mayn, kinda reminded me of sum west coast shit. sum of ya shit wuz funny, chea 8/10, werd
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04-09-05, 11:31 AM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: 0825 899A
Thanxx still uppin!
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