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Voted For: Newkid
very close battle you both battles were really good but i think new kid won this cuz of this better punchlines and his better structure I enjoyed reading this battle it was really good but Golden won this skripts one keep on practicing you had a nice verse 2 vote new kid return the vote please Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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This was feedback posted for Skriptz
lol this is a funny battle im not gon vote doe but good verse from both of yall
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Voted For: Newkid
Skriptz~ Fave Line- Fag will never be ready...like kids who get pop quizzes He signed up for the punchline league... .........................but he doesn't know what that is Worst Line- Your skillz are shit...cause they are looking like mold Only time you think your rhymes are dark... .................................is when your typing in bold ^^^ The bold line Is playyed out I liked your flow easy to read nice structure..Multis ehhh none NewKid~ Fave line yo i was n 'LA' ya momz was on mah dik so i had 2 'dodg-er' cuz she kept 'throwin her head at mah ballz' like a 'game of soccer' ^^ fuckin funny yo always good too make a reader laugh Worst Line- ya name SkRiPtZ....but like ya keyboard don't work ya 'TeXt Iz OfF' n da 'AnSwEr'2 ya sig iz...dat ya wak ass verse iz wat DaViD WeSlEy FaLl ehhhh Newkid your structure is bad yo DoNt TyPe LiKe ThIs aLl ThE T!m3.....Your humor was great...I dont like the way you pointed out the wording with the ' ' because they never had a space after....Just fix ya Structure But You win for punches...Multis ehhhh Winner~:New Kid |
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Voted For: Skriptz
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=186164 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=185292 rtf please skriptz took this. structure was kinda shitty, but i was feelin this drop big time. punches hit real hard, and were worded good. i didnt really see any hard personals, but i was feelin Skriptz verse more. one sided battle to me. I like tha creativite in this one. and you also had more consistency. but this was a good battle no hate and vote Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Skriptz
i said i wuz unna 2 vote in yo battl becuz u votd in mih battl wit keyz @ skriptz! but i tink dat skriptz won diz eazily he had da much mo consistant punchlinez his verse wuz hard hitting on da way thru where az newkidz verse wuz kind of playd in a few of hiz linez an da wording of hiz punchlinez were not on pont lyke skriptz so mih vote muss go 2 skriptz fo da better punchez, creativity, wrdplay an flow Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Newkid
newkidd took this.....I'll BRB if I can vote with an explained one. |
when i clap things..........you gon b layin on ya BaK KiNg
'skriptz still aint loyal'..no matta how much he beg n 'write BlaK QuEEn' Hard opener. Nice personal, and a nice punch u wanna be a thug...onli hood u live n iz ya coat head-space think he push pounds....but like'BiGGie now'u dealin sum 'DEAD WEIGHT' nice wordplay. This overall bar couldve been better, but still nice yo i was n 'LA' ya momz was on mah dik so i had 2 'dodg-er' cuz she kept 'throwin her head at mah ballz' like a 'game of soccer' Dope ass line. Nice wordplay, and nice mettas in this one. Prolly ya best ya name SkRiPtZ....but like ya keyboard don't work ya 'TeXt Iz OfF' n da 'AnSwEr'2 ya sig iz...dat ya wak ass verse iz wat DaViD WeSlEy FaLl 2nd line was worded kind poor, but we got it I liked this verse. It was comical and hard hitting with the punches and wordplay. Nothing I seen here that you really just need to work on, just a pure clean verse. 8/10 Skriptz verse: Newkid...aka Kordozar's brother...have we even met?* Practically has so many wins...he's not even a vet [b]A nice opener. Hard bar, nice personal Fag will never be ready...like kids who get pop quizzes He signed up for the punchline league... .........................but he doesn't know what that is Kinda wack bar to me, and poorly structured Looking like a retard kid...shades looked like there cracked Typing Like This ...will probably give you more Impact I think this wouldve been a nice personal if I wouldve clicked on tha link. Links are kinda a waist of time for voters, but you didnt lose points, because I understnad it, and it flowed and rhymed well Your skillz are shit...cause they are looking like mold Only time you think your rhymes are dark... .................................is when your typing in bold Kinda a wack closer. Structure fell off here too, and it didnt flow together well. I felt like this verse was poorly organized and structured bad. I wasnt feeling this verse that much, and it seemed un-interesting. Some of the punches werent all that, but you made up for it wit tha personals. U started off too soft, then your verse kept goin up and down. No consistency in this one. My vote goes to newkid. More consistency. I felt like he never fell off in this one. He came harder with the punches, and mettas and wordplay. RTF on battle against Esco ya'll.....PLZ no hate...Just check my battle stats, if link aint in sig. |
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Voted For: Newkid
metaz-kid punches-kid structure-kid overall flow-kid newkid....7/10...i liked this iono but i felt skriptz verse was whack n his rhymes were streched and everything...i giv skriptz a 4/10 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Newkid
when i clap things..........you gon b layin on ya BaK KiNg 'skriptz still aint loyal'..no matta how much he beg n 'write BlaK QuEEn' 6/10...decent opener u wanna be a thug...onli hood u live n iz ya coat head-space think he push pounds....but like'BiGGie now'u dealin sum 'DEAD WEIGHT' 7/10...first was played a lil, but the second made up for it yo i was n 'LA' ya momz was on mah dik so i had 2 'dodg-er' cuz she kept 'throwin her head at mah ballz' like a 'game of soccer' 7/10...lol, funny shit ya name SkRiPtZ....but like ya keyboard don't work ya 'TeXt Iz OfF' n da 'AnSwEr'2 ya sig iz...dat ya wak ass verse iz wat DaViD WeSlEy FaLl 5/10...not a good closer 25/40 Newkid...aka Kordozar's brother...have we even met?* Practically has so many wins...he's not even a vet 5/10...wasnt feelin it Fag will never be ready...like kids who get pop quizzes He signed up for the punchline league... .........................but he doesn't know what that is 6/10...secon line was wack, first was nice thoughLooking like a retard kid...shades looked like there cracked Typing Like This ...will probably give you more Impact 6/10...thoguh it had links, they werent that effective Your skillz are shit...cause they are looking like mold Only time you think your rhymes are dark... .................................is when your typing in bold 5/10...not a good closer 22/40 both shoood improve their closers and multies, skriptz i kno you kooda came harder, but jsut didnt in this one, so sry, but ima have to vote against ya here ;) v/newkid rtf Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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