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Voted For: ..Decree..
Decree gets my vote, had a lot better punches than Flip, And it wasn't really that close to me. His best line was I'm eclipsen this kid like tha sun moon an stars... his flows choopy..homo...like "pickup" lines at gay bars... Vote=Decree |
Voted For: ..Decree..
checkin this out............... think decree took this one...on account of better idea and alot more imagery.....flip, you had a decent piece, but a little too basic, vocab could be better, and i wasn't really gettin any mental images.....but keep workin on it and you'll do fine.... flip, thought some lines coulda been worded diff, some were a little simple, but for the most you stayed consistent, nice visuals created, strong emotion....nice twist at the end....keep up and maybe you'll be godly.....maybe, haha, word nice battle v flip rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=186164 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=185292 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=187167 |
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