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~Lady Fiya~ 05-09-05 05:05 PM

you called her drama, it's black queen not drama, konflikts..

Black Queen 05-09-05 08:05 PM

^^^im not drama queen im black queen did you even read da verses

Black Queen 05-09-05 08:05 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Black Queen
^^^im not drama queen im black queen did you even read da verses

dat was directed to konflict

Black Queen 05-11-05 03:28 PM

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Ryan Hughes 05-12-05 11:23 AM

upppppiinnnnnn.................................... ....

B_Loco 05-12-05 01:45 PM

Voted For: Young Blaze

Punches-Blaze...had sum hot punches dat did damage
Multis-Both...yall tied in this category
Creativity-Blaze...making them creative punches what got u this category

vote: Blaze

Dirty Nigga 05-13-05 07:10 AM

uppin for fam.......................................

Pro. 05-14-05 07:09 PM

This was feedback posted for Young Blaze
 
I wanted ta vote but my post count aint high enough!!

Young blazed this gurl....simple in fact

Queen had sum personals but really didnt make any diff.

this line killed it for her(Make Black lose it when I spray flame leave this lame Ho useless…
U can hate..but I'll stay ahead of "B" like Straight "A" Students….)

^^That was Nice!!!^^^

sorry no vote but my feedback is worth hearin!

Queen you came in with a weak opener
no punchez really
maybe 1
but didnt land right!!

hollah!!

young blaze Holla at me if you wanna battle sumtimes.
(I aint scared ta post...LOL!)that was nice 4 real!

Pro. 05-14-05 07:12 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Re~Verb
Voted For: Black Queen

BLACK QUEEN

Most of your battle are with Newbies and Wack Emcees
you lack plenty, hold no Punches like a Pitcher that's half empty
^^seemed a lil forced to rhyme..not a great punch 4/10
You ain't got PHAT shit your verse is Stretch like a FAT kid
i rap quick, call you Warm-Up cuz you need more Practice
^^lil forced to rhyme again...lil beta punch 5/10
and my punches are like music..they leave lasting re-percussions
And when vets talk of his skills..its all ancient history discussions
^^decent bar...decent punch 6/10
and to tell your the truth, you aren't really my homie
i'll break your legs, and get you to walk man, like sony
^^gud wordplay..but not a great punch 5/10
so i'll break you off easy, and you'd better be left dead
watch me drop knowledge on him, and hope it hits his head
^^o.k closer..5/10

overall...25/50...50%...picked up a lil towards the end...
you could do with uppin your creativitie..few gud concepts but the way u worded em let u down, also couple bars seemed a bit forced to rhyme

YOUNG BLAZE

When I spit, I even make the "ground sick" like I "puked on rubble”
Cuz Tikz will just "silence ya clique"(click) like "muting seat buckles
^^wordplay impressive...but i felt this was a lil self glory...5/10
Shove my fist through her gums make em hand me her chewins
Queen is ruined i'll "open her chest" and leave her"showing more heart" than a "Family Reunion”….
^^not really a diss...more a statement 4/10
Any 1 of yall Boys Come Disarm Me holdin them Toys Than Point Em And Harm Me…
yall never Grew-Nuts, i'll leave ya `CREW-CUT,` like `T.J.` was Joinin Da Army…(the jury)
^^again gud wordplay..but this isnt a punch or diss..4/10
Rippin threw yah blouse’s,Queens body parts found In Couches.
Leave Her “Scared Ta Post” Like “Fence Builders”Near Haunted House’s….
^^lovin the wordplay again...for that ive gotta give u 6/10..but still not really a diss..upp ya personals
Make Black lose it when I spray flame leave this lame Ho useless…
U can hate..but I'll stay ahead of "B" like Straight "A" Students….
^^nah...great wordplay,but more self-glory that a direct punch..4/10

overall...23/50...
close battle...i really wanted to go with blaze coz u got sum sick wordplay...but i cudnt spot a direct punch at your opponent, ya lines were kinda self glory or statements, neither of u had personals..but black queens hit were more directed at her opponent..

vote black queen..no hate

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^^^self glory...fuck she did tha same thing...thats baised^^^

Black Queen 05-17-05 09:22 PM

^^^^ok lost n confused but uppin fo more votes .......

josh654789 05-17-05 10:28 PM

This was feedback posted for Black Queen
 
queen get the win on this...i wasnt feelin the other one as much...

morse code 05-17-05 10:50 PM

Voted For: Black Queen

When I spit, I even make the "ground sick" like I "puked on rubble”
Cuz Tikz will just "silence ya clique"(click) like "muting seat buckles
7/10...good 2nd punch but first was good werdplay but no meaning, lol
Shove my fist through her gums make em hand me her chewins
Queen is ruined i'll "open her chest" and leave her"showing more heart" than a "Family Reunion”….
6/10...first line was bad, 2nd was good but strecthed
Any 1 of yall Boys Come Disarm Me holdin them Toys Than Point Em And Harm Me…
yall never Grew-Nuts, i'll leave ya `CREW-CUT,` like `T.J.` was Joinin Da Army…(the jury)
6/10...eehh
Rippin threw yah blouse’s,Queens body parts found In Couches.
Leave Her “Scared Ta Post” Like “Fence Builders”Near Haunted House’s….
7/10...lmao, nice punch,
Make Black lose it when I spray flame leave this lame Ho useless…
U can hate..but I'll stay ahead of "B" like Straight "A" Students….
7/10...decent
33/50
overall nice verse, fwew fillers here adn there adn a few stretcehd lines but overall it was nice


Most of your battle are with Newbies and Wack Emcees
you lack plenty, hold no Punches like a Pitcher that's half empty
6/10...wack 1st line, second was better and played but you did it originally
You ain't got PHAT shit your verse is Stretch like a FAT kid
i rap quick, call you Warm-Up cuz you need more Practice
7/10...nice
and my punches are like music..they leave lasting re-percussions
And when vets talk of his skills..its all ancient history discussions
8/10...nice werdplay and good flow and rhyme scheme
and to tell your the truth, you aren't really my homie
i'll break your legs, and get you to walk man, like sony
7/10...filler, 2nd line was nice though
so i'll break you off easy, and you'd better be left dead
watch me drop knowledge on him, and hope it hits his head
7/10...good closer
36/50
good punches and good structure and flow, very good verse

overal-close as battle ya'll, when i came to vote id thought this wood be good and sure enuff it was, nice battle

both competitors plz rtf, i have one in my sig and another one (you can seaarch)that is easy to decide....plz rtf

NewKid 05-18-05 01:03 AM

Voted For: Black Queen

blakk queen got dis 1 n a bag

blakk queen-aight good openor shit was kind of hot u had sum good punches threw da whole thing sum personals n ya verse 2 u came hard n dis battle n da 1st line u did have a multie and n a couple otha lines u had a multie or 2 good shit u had a overall betta verse den young blaze ya shit wasnt stretched like hiz most of it was direcetd towards him n not hiz crew kept it good threw da whole thing

young blaze- ya shit was aight man till u started cumin at her crew n not her ya punches was kind of plain nun dat caught mah eye no personals dat i seen dat i liked da whole verse was kind of plain fix ya structure as i told u b4 have sum betta punches and personals n ya verse cum hard everi battle and u gon win

vote- blakk queen

Ryan Hughes 05-18-05 10:39 AM

uppppppiinnnnnn................................... ........

Black Queen 05-18-05 05:54 PM

thx fo da votes peps uppin.........................


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