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Voted For: MiSk

mettas=misk
punches=tied
structure=misk
flow=misk
personals=misk
creativity=da rippa(murda inc line was good).

overall man misk took this coz he had better punches n flow was better. Rippa man you need to sort ya flow out n construct ya punches better.rtv http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=188270. Misk you already voted on it so rippa can u drop a vote plz.peace

hey don't sleep vote

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nice i'm a "Flyweight" now..........
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Voted For: DA RIPPA

checkin this out...............

think rippa took this one...on account of better idea and alot more imagery.....misk, you had a decent piece, but a little too basic, vocab could be better, and i wasn't really gettin any mental images.....but keep workin on it and you'll do fine....plus he had per

misk, thought some lines coulda been worded diff, some were a little simple, but for the most you stayed consistent, nice visuals created, strong emotion....nice twist at the end....keep up and maybe you'll be godly.....maybe, haha, word

nice battle

v rippa

rtf

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Voted For: MiSk

aiight easy battle yo.. misk killed this due to harder punches, personals, vocab and flow... damn...
opener - M
closer - M
flow - M
Structure - M
vocab - M
punches - M
personals - M..
overall - M no hate how i saw it...

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thanks for the votes....
damn 256 views and this battle aint closed
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