Voted For: b-gurl

You're a weak femcee a slutty gurl willing to bite
My point is, how can u join 2 months ago and still be new 2 the site
You can tell she new waitin' for wack people to vote only need 6 post's
Almost ingaged a vote nope, you're like diherea u've been Diagnosed
Girl u just a weak person fuckin with the wronge kind of authority
you got a Silent majority with a weak goal settin no priority's
You're face looks like a disgrace to mothernatures mistakes
To get rid of u people wanna keep on killing u and dispose u in diffrent lakes


First 4 Linez Wyuz Iight Retro, But U Started 2 Fall Off After Dat, Wordplay Wuznt Very Creative, & Alot Ov Played Concepts, Wuznt Feelin Usin Her Sexuality Against Her, But Then Again It Izza Personal & Disrespects Her, So I Guess It Had Sumwhat Ov An Effect, If U Kept Consistancy ThruOut, U Wuld Ov Got Da Win 4sho


What!? u think u got a 'new angle on dopeness?'*
I think this muthafucka gon and lost sum 'focus!'
If u wanna 'see' a 'new degree'** on how 2 emcee
I'll teach u, cuz i do this shit-- 'effortlessly'
I'll even 'break yo neck' so its easier 4 u to see!
u wanna talk about 'angles', mathematics*** n shit
how da fuck u gon do dat wen u dnt even no english yet!?
fuck it. its over i aint even gona waste my breath,
like u will when my verbal bullets puncture your chest!


Good Ideaz In Ya Linez, Juz Needed 2 Have Better Wordplay Within Dem, Closer Wuz Nice, Hiz First Few Line Beat Ur'z, Not Dat Ur'z Wuz Bad, They Wuz Iight, U Kept A Certain Level Ov Consistancy Thru Out, Flowed Really Nicely All Da Way Thru

Vote=B-Gurl, More Consistancy In Da Flow




Return Da Vote In Da Link Or I'll Have 2 Get Diz Removed, Sorry 4 Soundin Lyke A Prick Sayin Dat But I Want Dat Battle Closed vvvv
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