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05-23-05, 06:38 PM
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Skriptz vs KhAoZ ThEoRy
IP: 667F 22FB
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-26-05 at 06:38 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. This Battle Is Now Closed
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05-23-05, 06:39 PM
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#2
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IP: 667F 22FB
KhAoZ ThEoRy has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-23-05 06:39 PM.
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05-23-05, 06:48 PM
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#3
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IP: 258C A279
Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-23-05 06:48 PM.
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05-23-05, 07:06 PM
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IP: 258C A279
i'll stomp your face on the ground - so you'll be feeling like dirt
plus u getting smacked w/ a globe - so u just left in a world of hurt u got no "welcome to rv" post - but Rv must of been asleep & ur loss to me is like King of the Hill - just another damn repeat There's only one word to describe you - and that word is Gay Cuz once Khaoz entered the battle - he tripped over the doorway Please kid just give it up - cuz in this battle - I'm a stalker But once Khaoz took me to school - I pushed his ass in the locker I'll knock you off you feet - so you can't even stand up for yourself & you can change your name - but your still stuck w/ yourself ...
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05-24-05, 06:48 AM
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IP: 52BB CC77
Thought U Wuz Gonna Be A Challenge, So I Had 2 Accept
U Callin Out Newbies? Cuz Ya Flowz Sunk Now Ya Ship Wrecked HeavyWeight Champ? Bitch Aint Rocky, Or Even A ''Contender'' EZ Win? Nup, Fake MC Culdnt ''Pull Da Stringz'' If I Handed Him A Fender Bend-Ya Barz, Cuz They Aint Straight, Like Yo Persona Ur Copyrighted By Khaos, Bcuz U Know I Just Owned-Ya Now I'll Disown-Ya, Put U Up For Adoption, Losingz Ya Only Option I Heard Yo Name Wuz ''Cherry-Red'' Cuz Da ''Pussy'' Stays ''Poppin'' Flowz Is Played Out, Pleaze Dont ''Bust-a-Rhyme'' Just ''Stay-Out'' Yo Verses Aint Goin 2 Plan, Lyke U Just Lost The ''Lay-Out''  Fender = A Model Of A Guitar
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05-24-05, 06:56 AM
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IP: 52BB CC77
Letz Get Sum Voters On Diz Hot Battle Cha'll, We Will Return Da Vote
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05-24-05, 07:08 AM
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#7
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Ka.Nek.ShuN
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This was feedback posted for KhAoZ ThEoRy
IP: A7AC EBEC
viewin poles... nice battle boys............................
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05-24-05, 12:36 PM
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IP: 4EF5 FB12
Hey Can We Get Sum Voterz On Diz Battle Peoplez???
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05-24-05, 02:59 PM
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#9
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IP: 258C A279
uppin this shit
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05-24-05, 06:38 PM
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#10
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==bLaCk-HanD==
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IP: B34C 2F8B
Yo, Holla At Diz Battle Rite Here...Diz Iz Fiyah Fo Yall
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05-25-05, 05:17 AM
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IP: 9281 04E5
Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote
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05-25-05, 03:01 PM
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#12
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IP: 258C A279
vote on this shit.. seriously
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05-25-05, 04:48 PM
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Lyrics Put MCs On Atkin's Diet!
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IP: 7518 2F0A
Voted For: Skriptz
Aight I'm Lazy...So I'ma Jus Do It Real Simple...Dont Take Da Vote Away...It'll Still Be Explained... PUNCHES: Skriptz...Both Used Em, His Were More Effective PERSONALS: Skriptz...Khaoz Really Didnt Have 2 Many... CREATIVITY Khaoz...Khoaz Verse Had More Thought...Lines Were More Clever FLOW/STRUCTURE: Skriptz...Just Take A Look At Da Verse...Both Went Off At Points But Khaoz Was More A Lil More Off WORDPLAY: Both...Both Niggas Used Wordplay In Da Same Way, No One Stood Out In Dis Category OPENER: Khaoz MIDDLE: Skriptz CLOSER: Skriptz "I'll knock you off you feet - so you can't even stand up for yourself & you can change your name - but your still stuck w/ yourself" OVERALL VOTE: Skriptz Tight Battle...RTF...$cream At Me Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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05-25-05, 06:37 PM
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IP: 258C A279
uppin this shit
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05-25-05, 08:33 PM
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QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
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IP: 00A2 4ED0
Voted For: Skriptz
Thought U Wuz Gonna Be A Challenge, So I Had 2 Accept U Callin Out Newbies? Cuz Ya Flowz Sunk Now Ya Ship Wrecked Eh ok 6/10 HeavyWeight Champ? Bitch Aint Rocky, Or Even A ''Contender'' EZ Win? Nup, Fake MC Culdnt ''Pull Da Stringz'' If I Handed Him A Fender Good attemp of a punch line but didn’t hit hard 6/10 Bend-Ya Barz, Cuz They Aint Straight, Like Yo Persona Ur Copyrighted By Khaos, Bcuz U Know I Just Owned-Ya Wack 3/10 Now I'll Disown-Ya, Put U Up For Adoption, Losingz Ya Only Option I Heard Yo Name Wuz ''Cherry-Red'' Cuz Da ''Pussy'' Stays ''Poppin'' Iight good 7/10 Flowz Is Played Out, Pleaze Dont ''Bust-a-Rhyme'' Just ''Stay-Out'' Yo Verses Aint Goin 2 Plan, Lyke U Just Lost The ''Lay-Out'' Eh 6/10 Overall: 28/50 i'll stomp your face on the ground - so you'll be feeling like dirt plus u getting smacked w/ a globe - so u just left in a world of hurt Good punch line and openor 8/10 u got no "welcome to rv" post - but Rv must of been asleep & ur loss to me is like King of the Hill - just another damn repeat Nice 7/10 There's only one word to describe you - and that word is Gay Cuz once Khaoz entered the battle - he tripped over the doorway Eh okay 6/10 Please kid just give it up - cuz in this battle - I'm a stalker But once Khaoz took me to school - I pushed his ass in the locker Eh 5/10 I'll knock you off you feet - so you can't even stand up for yourself & you can change your name - but your still stuck w/ yourself Iight good closer 6/10 Overall: 32/50 v/ skript for just a better verse Rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=188590 |
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