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Voted For: AckRite
checkin this out............... think ace took this one...on account of better idea and alot more imagery.....star, you had a decent piece, but a little too basic, vocab could be better, and i wasn't really gettin any mental images.....but keep workin on it and you'll do fine.... star, thought some lines coulda been worded diff, some were a little simple, but for the most you stayed consistent, nice visuals created, strong emotion....nice twist at the end....keep up and maybe you'll be godly.....maybe, haha, word nice battle v ace rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=186164 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=185292 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=187167 |
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ i meant ack gets my vote
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Voted For: AckRite
Wow. This wasn't even right. Ackrite why u even bullyin this nigga? Ok, every line u had was a direct punch on him and his raps ain't have nothing. He lost the battle on his first line. yo you say yo ass is ackrite well nigga u wrong ill boogle yo mind so bad youll be singin da barney theme song/ Anytime you mention barney, you might as well put an L in the column. The best line here was You've Neva Been Great You Aint No Vet MC..Fallin Off Incredibly Cuz I Live "Life On the Edge"...And He’s "One Step Ahead Of Me"! So Vote Ackrite EZ |
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