http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192388

and i never got dq'ed or anythin like that for feedin....... people justy thought it was questionable that i fed...... and dude, u can say wat u want but i bet u i spent less time one my verse than u did yours...... i keyed it up right there at the screen right before i left in under 15 minutes.... while u were researchin my ass before i EVEN set up the battle

.................................it shows :thumbup:

This was feedback posted for Phenom-in-all
 

Just peeping polls............can't vote cause of O.Y.D

Yes, we are Owning You Daily :thumbup:™

This was feedback posted for FuxJustAWord
 

lmao @ Phenom text battling...

.............feedback tho

This was feedback posted for Phenom-in-all
 

Checkin the polls............................................. ......

uppin............................................. .

lol........... i didnt say it wouldnt show......... but dont get all "ima KO u" on me cuz u didnt drop decent either.. lol, itll be dudes decypherin wackness for this battle.... i was honestly juss hopin u were as bad as most noobs wen i was postin my shit

oooook............................................ ...uppin

This was feedback posted for Phenom-in-all
 

can't vote- just peepin the scenery with 50 characters of blah.

uppin............... dayum these text battles take days..........

This was feedback posted for Phenom-in-all
 

LMFAOOOOOOOO

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WTF....... i swear i had a line in this that was about ur tracks..... like (thisll kinda be the concept)
"Alil upset are we, sed 'Hate it or Love it' and Rv's choice was ugly
Shit, I can tell, cuz now ur around screamin dog 'I'll Make You Love Me'"

sumthin like that, but worded better......... where the fuck did it go...... anyways, uppin

that line woulda been ass... like Soc's audio......

Voted For: FuxJustAWord



dude, you wack like Cool J songs, might as well drop it all
No skills, just headsprung, hey... its somethin like a phenom in all
im bombin yall, like evictions bitch, get the hell out
as nice as the new star wars movies, cuz you just a fuckin sellout...
you lookin scared while im flexin this knife, im perplexin his mic
hows he winnin this fight? he aint neva battled text in his life
Jay Z's a phenomenon... while you admitted you was gay and wack
blood turns dark after a while, so maybe we'll love it when you fade to black...
this man's the K O King? i wrestle and beat fools, you aint been betta
you couldnt rap a decent punch usin characters from Def Jam, Vendetta

Real Nice Wordplay Usin LL Songs In Da Openin Bar
Rest Ov Da Verse Wuz Good 2, U Stayed On Point Wid Da Personalz, Wordplay In Yo Punchez Wuz Good 2, Nice Consistant Flow, U Bought It Raw In Diz Battle, Not Much I Wuznt Feelin Dat Fade 2 Black Bar, Other Then That, A Good Solid Hard Hittin Verse Dawg

I'm real, you want attention like children-singers
I drop Fux.. like I'm cuttin off middle-fingers

I'd fly-down to chi-town, just to say goodbye-clown
so why-pout, when my-mouth, will make you all out cry-now

Fought to buy back ya no-show, cause ya record is so-so
like cali wavin a : nono : , you got no chance you homo

C'mon-I-hate-text, make this a song-and-make-tracks
You so fem, the only time you rule is as a Dom-in-a-trix

I'ma wrap this up, like I forgot to, your girls holdin my seed
don't do like you did in the tourny - be bold, and don't feed

Next time lets do audio, cause we know I bust-on-herbs
you couldn't touch me audio or text, so fux just-a-word

Iight Verse 2, Not Az Much Consistancy Az Fux, Few Linez U Builded Up Nicely But Then Da Punch Lacked, Propps 4Dat ''Be Bold But Dont Feed'' Line, Dat Wuz Nice, More Bars Lyke Dat 1 & U Wuld Ov Got Da Win

Vote/Fux=He Had Da More Consistant Flow, Rhymez Were Iight Frum Both, But Phenom Wuz Lackin Da Consistancy, Altho Fux Verse Wuznt Nuthin Special, It Had A Lil More Consistancy In Da Bars, Better Creative Wordplay 2...

Plz Return Da Vote In Da Link Below

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=192150

This was feedback posted for FuxJustAWord
 

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dude, you wack like Cool J songs, might as well drop it all
No skills, just headsprung, hey... its somethin like a phenom in all

Pretty dope

im bombin yall, like evictions bitch, get the hell out
as nice as the new star wars movies, cuz you just a fuckin sellout...

Lol ight

you lookin scared while im flexin this knife, im perplexin his mic
hows he winnin this fight? he aint neva battled text in his life

Ok personal no real connection though

Jay Z's a phenomenon... while you admitted you was gay and wack
blood turns dark after a while, so maybe we'll love it when you fade to black...

I like the concept but this could of been doone soooooo nice still a str8 hit

this man's the K O King? i wrestle and beat fools, you aint been betta
you couldnt rap a decent punch usin characters from Def Jam, Vendetta

Blah too indirect and weak

NEXT

I'm real, you want attention like children-singers
I drop Fux.. like I'm cuttin off middle-fingers

Lol nice

I'd fly-down to chi-town, just to say goodbye-clown
so why-pout, when my-mouth, will make you all out cry-now

Weak

Fought to buy back ya no-show, cause ya record is so-so
like cali wavin a : nono : , you got no chance you homo

Weak

C'mon-I-hate-text, make this a song-and-make-tracks
You so fem, the only time you rule is as a Dom-in-a-trix

Ight

I'ma wrap this up, like I forgot to, your girls holdin my seed
don't do like you did in the tourny - be bold, and don't feed

Ok personal

Next time lets do audio, cause we know I bust-on-herbs
you couldn't touch me audio or text, so fux just-a-word

Needed re-wording

Vted for fux because his verse was more consistant
Both please return the unbiased favour on me vs accomplish thanks