like the first line... nice flow threw out...dont like that killin yours self flow... flows back wit the sombi thing... like that high drive and hit shit line, flows dope... second guy sounds like e40... contant flow... just decent threw out cuz he dont switch up the flow much except for a few multi's one after another << liked that... and then u should switch up the flow a lil bit like that part where u say sumin like... grab the gat im runnin back sumin sumin switch... u shoulda switched to that flow and been like... caught the cat im lovin that fuck a grimy bitch... u know what im sayin... i hate when i hear a cool flow for a sec and peeps dont take off on it... well i accidently stopped it after that so decent drop and what im talkin about with findin that cool flow and stayin wit it ... a good example (if u dont know what im sayin) is- the first song on the new nas cd, the second verse, where he flows " a message to those who locked us up"... anyway good drop... pz