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Implicit 06-11-05 08:00 PM

Voted For: FreeZe_In_HeLL

Freeze in hell - very good verse..ur opener was creative..good personal..i liked ur 2nd bar..both lines were good..ur whole verse was a complete lyrical attack on his name and where hes from..good use of personals..u had some cool punches..ur closer was alright but coulda been better..but other than that very good verse.....8/10




Stanza - i read one of ur other battles and it looked like in this one u might have underestimated him or ur skill is slowly decreasing..ur opener was very weak..2nd bar was a horrible diss..3rd bar was kinda good kinda creative..from then on was horrible..not very good verse..not really any personals..ur punches were really weak.....3/10


Freeze In Hell wins!!!!!

Sik Wit It 06-11-05 10:59 PM

Voted For: FreeZe_In_HeLL

Why Must I Continue To Battle These Wack Monkey Children
This Dude Mad Bcuz My Lyrics Tears him Down Like Buildings
decent punch
Yo Crackheads Pass Your Dope Down Bcuz its not worth Smokin
This Is a Typed Text Battle Dude....So Why the Hell You Chokin?
wack punch., omg
Well I Thought You hade Some Skills But I Can See Through You
Bcuz You couldnt Add Up To My Skills With my Rymes Times Two
wtf? ..weak shit
Fucking Roachez Easily Everytime You Zoned Out, Come Back To Life
I Screwed N' Chopped Yo Wife Like Houston Music & Paul Wall At The Mic
ah.. hell no mayn..
Eternity Is a Long time Dude So Pull Out Your Ruler And Lets Measure
His rymes Could be A Ho On The Job and He still couldnt Provide Pleasure
decent closer


Fuck a ‘stanza’…u don’t deserve one line in my sonnet
Claims hes ’pro’ but the only winners in ‘NC’ was a ’college’*1
good opener
Gain some knowledge, get your skill up, and quit bein a fan*2
I guess its hard to break the habit when u named yourself after ‘stan’(za)*3
weak
I know ‘cokeheads throwin up’ could ‘spit an iller line’ than u (get it!)*4
Only reason u fill the ‘seats’, cause none of rapverse can ‘stand’ u (damn)
decent
I guess ima be the one to leave a ‘2’ in your ‘losses place’
Cause the only time ya rhymes is ‘tite’, is when u ‘runnin out a space’
this one was aight.. a little weak though
So just put up the pen, and lay ya notebook on the shelf
Cause the only time ppl liked ya ‘spits’ is when u ‘drowned’ yourself *5
wack

F_in_H – overall u had an aight drop.. the punches were on point
And the structure needs a little help.. ur vocab was okay.. and the
Flow to ur verse was decent.. but overall for u.. u had an aight
Drop..

Stanza – overall u had a weak drop.. those punches were just str8
Up wack, yo.. I know u could’ve came better than that.. but since
U didn’t.. u didn’t win this battle w/ those weak rhymes..

Overall - F took this one.. punches were connecting & the flow
+ structure to his piece was aight.. & Stanza didn’t come as good
as F did..


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