Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 ko
4-1 Auto win

1 day check
1hr drop

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-11-05 at 12:02 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

(Stanza) has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 12:27 PM.

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FreeZe_In_HeLL has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 01:14 PM.

Fuck a ‘stanza’…u don’t deserve one line in my sonnet
Claims hes ’pro’ but the only winners in ‘NC’ was a ’college’*1
Gain some knowledge, get your skill up, and quit bein a fan*2
I guess its hard to break the habit when u named yourself after ‘stan’(za)*3
I know ‘cokeheads throwin up’ could ‘spit an iller line’ than u (get it!)*4
Only reason u fill the ‘seats’, cause none of rapverse can ‘stand’ u (damn)
I guess ima be the one to leave a ‘2’ in your ‘losses place’
Cause the only time ya rhymes is ‘tite’, is when u ‘runnin out a space’
So just put up the pen, and lay ya notebook on the shelf
Cause the only time ppl liked ya ‘spits’ is when u ‘drowned’ yourself *5

*1) UNC= ‘college‘, not ‘pro’
*2) http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=194574&page=2 , hes conversing about how good his opponents verse was
*3) ‘stan’ the eminem song about the obsessed fan
*4) coke=line (line of coke), throwin up= spit ill
*5) like he drowned himself in his own spit

Im only explaining cause I kno some ppl on this site that r too dumb to get my punches…

No hate…nice battle

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nice shit mayne...no hate on dis battle...........

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Nice drop mayne Lets uppin This LOL ..Im ready to see what peeps think

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bump this.........................................

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Voted For: FreeZe_In_HeLL

Haha Pretty Nice Battle Here...

(Stanza):

Punches weren't really hitting that hard man...Your verse lacked creativity and personals, and you were not very consistent.

Break Down:

Why Must I Continue To Battle These Wack Monkey Children
This Dude Mad Bcuz My Lyrics Tears him Down Like Buildings

No, played and weak!!! 4/10

Yo Crackheads Pass Your Dope Down Bcuz its not worth Smokin
This Is a Typed Text Battle Dude....So Why the Hell You Chokin?

No...3/10

Well I Thought You hade Some Skills But I Can See Through You
Bcuz You couldnt Add Up To My Skills With my Rymes Times Two

What?? No man come on now 2/10

Fucking Roachez Easily Everytime You Zoned Out, Come Back To Life
I Screwed N' Chopped Yo Wife Like Houston Music & Paul Wall At The Mic

LOL best yet...6/10

Eternity Is a Long time Dude So Pull Out Your Ruler And Lets Measure
His rymes Could be A Ho On The Job and He still couldnt Provide Pleasure

Played and weak...5/10

Overall: 20/50 (40%)

Freeze_In_Hell:

Haha pretty nice verse here from u man, Had some creative lines and funny punches and personals, but you do not need to explain every single little thing. But Overall, I was no doubt feeling your verse better.

Break Down:

Fuck a ‘stanza’…u don’t deserve one line in my sonnet
Claims hes ’pro’ but the only winners in ‘NC’ was a ’college’

LOL Good...7/10

Gain some knowledge, get your skill up, and quit bein a fan
I guess its hard to break the habit when u named yourself after ‘stan’(za)

Decent personal, kinda played, but decent...6/10

I know ‘cokeheads throwin up’ could ‘spit an iller line’ than u (get it!)*4
Only reason u fill the ‘seats’, cause none of rapverse can ‘stand’ u (damn)

LMAO NICE!! 9/10

I guess ima be the one to leave a ‘2’ in your ‘losses place’
Cause the only time ya rhymes is ‘tite’, is when u ‘runnin out a space’

LMAO!!!! Nice again...8/10

So just put up the pen, and lay ya notebook on the shelf
Cause the only time ppl liked ya ‘spits’ is when u ‘drowned’ yourself *5

OK...6/10

Overall: 36/50 (72%)

V/ Freeze_In_Hell

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good lookin out magik........................uppin

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Voted For: (Stanza)

its w/e......uppin...................................... .......

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Voted For: (Stanza)

V/Stanza

Why Must I Continue To Battle These Wack Monkey Children
This Dude Mad Bcuz My Lyrics Tears him Down Like Buildings
^Ok 6/10
Yo Crackheads Pass Your Dope Down Bcuz its not worth Smokin
This Is a Typed Text Battle Dude....So Why the Hell You Chokin?
^6/10
Well I Thought You hade Some Skills But I Can See Through You
Bcuz You couldnt Add Up To My Skills With my Rymes Times Two
^1st linez not good second line your recovered 6/10
Fucking Roachez Easily Everytime You Zoned Out, Come Back To Life
I Screwed N' Chopped Yo Wife Like Houston Music & Paul Wall At The Mic
^6/10
Eternity Is a Long time Dude So Pull Out Your Ruler And Lets Measure
His rymes Could be A Ho On The Job and He still couldnt Provide Pleasure
^6.5/10

Freeze:
Fuck a ‘stanza’…u don’t deserve one line in my sonnet
Claims hes ’pro’ but the only winners in ‘NC’ was a ’college’*1
^Weak 4/10
Gain some knowledge, get your skill up, and quit bein a fan*2
I guess its hard to break the habit when u named yourself after ‘stan’(za)*3
^??5/10
I know ‘cokeheads throwin up’ could ‘spit an iller line’ than u (get it!)*4
Only reason u fill the ‘seats’, cause none of rapverse can ‘stand’ u (damn)
^5/10
I guess ima be the one to leave a ‘2’ in your ‘losses place’
Cause the only time ya rhymes is ‘tite’, is when u ‘runnin out a space’
^LoL /?/ 6.5/10
So just put up the pen, and lay ya notebook on the shelf
Cause the only time ppl liked ya ‘spits’ is when u ‘drowned’ yourself *5
^Weak REALLY WEAK 4/10
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freeze you could have done alot better homie!your verse just wasnt hittinh!punches were weak!personalz were weak!everything was weak homie!
now stanza ya shyt could have been better also but you took this battle due to ya better punches,n everything else!just keep it up homie n ya next battle!come alot harder!DEUCEZ
(RTF IN MY BATTLE WITH E.C OR VOTE GETS REMOVED

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Voted For: FreeZe_In_HeLL

OK It's Like This:

Punches: Freeze
Personals: Freeze
Wordplay: Freeze
Structure: Freeze
Flow: Freeze
Multies: Freeze

Overall: Freeze

He took it in every category IMO

Stanza, you need to up your creativity and be more consistent

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