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King Solo 5 100.00%
(Stanza) 0 0%
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Old 06-10-05, 11:30 AM   #1
(Stanza)
This is my first post!
 
From: NC
(Stanza) vs King Solo

IP: 0825 899A

Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 KO

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-10-05 at 12:30 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Win by 3-0 KO
 
Old 06-10-05, 11:36 AM   #2
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Old 06-10-05, 11:49 AM   #3
(Stanza)
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Yo

You Wont Get Ahead In This battle Like A one sided quater
The Spit Off my Lips is The only Time Solos ever seen water
You Cant Even beat R-Rated With your PG-13 Disney Rymes
Put a Whole In Yo Pocket so You Think you Was Droppin Dimes
Enough With the Personal Stuff I Already Know What You Got On me
You Gonna say I Was Biting But Ppl Can See The Marks from Yo Teeth?
Only an Hour To Drop and Im Spitting and You aint Even Checked In
Bcuz Your Trying To Get Yo 5 dickriders In a Room for 3 At Holiday Inn
Killin is Never Going Down In Yo Part Of The Town So Dont Act Shell
Bcuz The only Time you Will Spit Fire Is When You Die and Go To Hell

Done

 
Old 06-10-05, 11:59 AM   #4
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Old 06-10-05, 12:01 PM   #5
King Solo
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Like a fat kid on a bench ya wack ass got RV downward sloping..
Talk about we thought you were gone…nah, we were just hoping..
Its true, ya hold skillz in the palm of ya hand, but then on the other hand..
Ya really a fake…seriously, have you ever heard of a rapper band.. (banned)
Stanza, my age surpasses you so it’s a fact you could never ‘son-me’..
Ya herb, cut it down to initials but we still know ya From: N.ewb C.ountry..
S.it and T.ake A N.ap, catch some Z.’s..ya A.ss can't play tha game..
^^ And as that line proves it, ya get merked just by spellin ya name..
Wanna give up, cuz like ‘solid encryptions’ ya ass can’t ‘hack it’…
Even stanza isn’t sure about himself……………………………….
………………………..that’s why he supports his title with brackets..


*don't get it don't vote.....
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Old 06-10-05, 12:05 PM   #6
(Stanza)
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Damn This Is Gonna be close Really LOL
What do You Think ?.....
 
Old 06-10-05, 12:26 PM   #7
King Solo
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maybe......maybe not

i am confident cuz of my personals in every bar....
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Old 06-10-05, 02:35 PM   #8
Murdah.txt
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Voted For: King Solo

ok solo this was a dope verse......
punches were on point flow was dope very easy to read
vocab was good and your personals hit perfectly
wasnt at all strected or tha lines werent forced which took this one easily for you

stanza....ight verse but punches didnt flow together
so that made tha flow off vocab was ight punches also didnt hit directly like solos sum good concepts there thou
very simple to like in and inn overall this couldve been much better ive seen way better stanza stay up famz
but vote=solo
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Old 06-10-05, 03:03 PM   #9
(Stanza)
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We Shouldnt keep That Vote now should we ?

King Solo I Thinkk You Should be man Enough to say that even you know that wasnt explained
 
Old 06-10-05, 10:15 PM   #10
LyricalMa$tamind
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Voted For: King Solo

STANZA
You Wont Get Ahead In This battle Like A one sided quater
The Spit Off my Lips is The only Time Solos ever seen water
^^DECENT OPENER
You Cant Even beat R-Rated With your PG-13 Disney Rymes
Put a Whole In Yo Pocket so You Think you Was Droppin Dimes
^^^MMMMMMMMMMM..................NO
Enough With the Personal Stuff I Already Know What You Got On me
You Gonna say I Was Biting But Ppl Can See The Marks from Yo Teeth?
^^^^O.K
Only an Hour To Drop and Im Spitting and You aint Even Checked In
Bcuz Your Trying To Get Yo 5 dickriders In a Room for 3 At Holiday Inn
^^^MEH
Killin is Never Going Down In Yo Part Of The Town So Dont Act Shell
Bcuz The only Time you Will Spit Fire Is When You Die and Go To Hell
^^^WEAK CLOSURE

STANZA- YA VERSE WUZ PRETTY WEAK I WUZNT REALLY FEELIN NUFFIN. DA BEST PART OF YA VERSE I THINK WUZ DA OPENER, LOL. B SIDES DAT U CAME PRETTY WEAK U NEED TA IMPROVE ALL YO PUNCHES N PERSONALS. YA STRUCTURE WUZ STR8 DOE. JUS KEEP ELEVATIN N U B IIGHT.

KING SOLO
Like a fat kid on a bench ya wack ass got RV downward sloping..
Talk about we thought you were gone…nah, we were just hoping..
^^^LOL GOOD OPENER
Its true, ya hold skillz in the palm of ya hand, but then on the other hand..
Ya really a fake…seriously, have you ever heard of a rapper band.. (banned)
^^^NICE PUNCH HIT PRETTY HARD
Stanza, my age surpasses you so it’s a fact you could never ‘son-me’..
Ya herb, cut it down to initials but we still know ya From: N.ewb C.ountry..
^^^HOTTEST LINE OF DA BATTLE GREAT PUNCH
S.it and T.ake A N.ap, catch some Z.’s..ya A.ss can't play tha game..
^^ And as that line proves it, ya get merked just by spellin ya name..
^^^ANOTHA HOTT ASS PUNCH MAYNE
Wanna give up, cuz like ‘solid encryptions’ ya ass can’t ‘hack it’…
Even stanza isn’t sure about himself……………………………….
………………………..that’s why he supports his title with brackets..
^^^DAYUM GOOD

KING SOLO- DAYUUMMMMMM, DO I EVEN NEED TA SAY N E THING. ITS A 1 SIDED BATTLE. SOLO YO SHIT WUZ FIRE. I MEAN DA PUNCHES WUZ HITTIN THROUGHOUT DA WHOLE BATTLE N PERSONALS WERE USED TA A GREAT EXTENT. MAYNE YO SHIT WUZ DAMN NEAR FLAWLESS
(9.5/10)

Mah v/ K.Solo for many reasons

LYRICALMA$TAMIND out nigga
~1~
WUN
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Old 06-11-05, 04:29 AM   #11
King Solo
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naw fuck dat stanza

i dont want these votes always getting removed

thats why battles dont get closed
its got enough explanation for me........
he commented on the flow, vocabs, personals, both us using good concepts and the basic rhyming in parts you did rhyming in and inn together

so enough explanation for me....
don't be a bitch and get it removed....
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Old 06-11-05, 10:45 AM   #12
MyNamesGrafhYall
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From: In A Guttah
IP: B2E0 BD1F

Voted For: King Solo

You Wont Get Ahead In This battle Like A one sided quater
The Spit Off my Lips is The only Time Solos ever seen water
^not understanding how da water thing izza diss?

You Cant Even beat R-Rated With your PG-13 Disney Rymes
Put a Whole In Yo Pocket so You Think you Was Droppin Dimes
^1st line wuz weak 2nd wuz ok

Enough With the Personal Stuff I Already Know What You Got On me
You Gonna say I Was Biting But Ppl Can See The Marks from Yo Teeth?
^dat wuz nyce

Only an Hour To Drop and Im Spitting and You aint Even Checked In
Bcuz Your Trying To Get Yo 5 dickriders In a Room for 3 At Holiday Inn
^nyce concept, horribly worded 4 real

Killin is Never Going Down In Yo Part Of The Town So Dont Act Shell
Bcuz The only Time you Will Spit Fire Is When You Die and Go To Hell
^very weak

wordplay wuz 2 basic, nuthin original or nuthin dat caught my attention & wanted 2 read again, try being more creative


Like a fat kid on a bench ya wack ass got RV downward sloping..
Talk about we thought you were gone…nah, we were just hoping..
^decent wordplay, real nyce pun in da second line

Its true, ya hold skillz in the palm of ya hand, but then on the other hand..
Ya really a fake…seriously, have you ever heard of a rapper band.. (banned)
^weakest bar in yo verse

Stanza, my age surpasses you so it’s a fact you could never ‘son-me’..
Ya herb, cut it down to initials but we still know ya From: N.ewb C.ountry..
^nuthin special but it wuz a better concept than most ov stanzas flow

S.it and T.ake A N.ap, catch some Z.’s..ya A.ss can't play tha game..
^^ And as that line proves it, ya get merked just by spellin ya name..
^highlight ov da battle, really creative concept & wordplay

Wanna give up, cuz like ‘solid encryptions’ ya ass can’t ‘hack it’…
Even stanza isn’t sure about himself……………………………….
………………………..that’s why he supports his title with brackets..
^
good first line, da personal in da 2nd wuz weak

U had da much better verse, wordplay wuz more complex & creative then stanza & yo punz hit alot harder, nuthin 2 personal dat made him look lyke a fool, but u styll got diz EZ..

vote=king solo-much more creative wordplay & da punchlines were more complex & harder hitting...plz rtf
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