^Shut up faggot..Im sure id murk you without effort.

Uppin for votes (3-1 my way)

Cmon people..it doesnt take that much effort to vote.

Uppin

Voted For: Denied Truth

guys this was a top battle...both you came strong.....
but theres no deneying the truth.........
D.T took it.....
multis
flow
and wordplay won it for him
no hate propain you came strong too but d.t jus edged it.....

Voted For: Denied Truth



Both yall took the topic the same way..I woulda liked to have sene someone spit this origianl but neither did but anways

Story development: Denied
Vocab: denied
Flow: denied
Structure: denied
Creativity: Neither...tie
Metas: Neither...tie


Overall both yall had poorly developed stories but denied's jus was put together better....propain stopped every 4 lines to tell us the sceen had changed<--thats wack...write ya story so people will know the scene changed instead of u having to dictate it to them.

Voted For: Denied Truth

denied truth: i didn't even know u did topicals lol, i was feeling this alot... i liked the way you flipped the topic around and not play off the cop shit emotion was ight could so wit a bit of work though... it kept me interested which was the main part... imagination was good.... i just felt you couldav gone deeper into your topic but it aint no biggi coz you pulled it off....

Propain: no way near the best ive seen from you... i was expecting alot more... imagination wasn't as good as denied truth... u just did the basic topic and not put any twists in it, which made it boring ish... overall it wasnt that bad but i just wasn't really feeling the way you flipped it, flow was good and the emoton was ight..

v/ denied truth

i felt that it was better, made a better understanding of the topic and flipped it quite nicely... no hate pz

Voted For: Denied Truth

denied- i liked this drop not bad had good flow and made me think...keep dropping shit like dis nice piece

pro-not bad either but could use alittle work....i like how you make it so it pictures it in your mind but i think denied got dis...

v.denied