Topic- Warrant For Your Arrest

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{Propain} has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-11-05 07:10 PM.

Denied Truth has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-11-05 07:29 PM.

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(Late in the evening)

SWAT arrives for my arrest but I see it Coming Early
Hear the door rattle and I look, its them Knocking Surely
Posted on the front porch, got me on point with Guns My Way
I go for the back door and Run Away

(Troopers load their rifles and follow behind)

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As I run through the woods Im Followed By The Heat
Sprinting through weeds as brush break at Bottoms Of My Feet
A strong breeze hits my face, look to the sky and light Shines In My Eyes
On the run, I look behind to see Nine Of Those Guys

(Sounds of a chopper can be heard in the distance)

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Come from the woods and into the Middle Of A Street
I aint playing but my lifes still Fiddiling With Heat
Run to a dead end with no place to go, is it the end of this Rat Race?
The same questions asked as guns load and Gats Blaze

(Gun fire lights up the night and rattling can be heard)

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Shells whistle by my head and captains are Shouting Out To Blast
Bullets hit the ground and dirts jumping Outta The Grass
I stand in the spotlights, surrounded by trigger Happy Feds
Covered in cross-hairs, and I aint talking Nappy Heads

(Make a break for it!)

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I start to run foward but suddenly I Fell On Back
Smoke fills the air as multiple Shells Attack
Been through Hell On Back and now my life Flashes Before My Eyes
Guns rattling and bullets Smashing Me 'Til I Die

(A Pool of blood emerges from my motionless boy\dy)

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Voted For: {Propain}

On snap this was a dope topical

1st of all Denied Truth -
I really enjoyed the creativity in the middle adapting it to slavery with some good imagery

Well Years Have Passed But Ima Captive Of This Time Frame
Forced To Pick Cotton, Grow Tobaco, N Harvest Brown Grain

Felt the flow was ok, needed to incorperate some multi's to help it smoother but i suppose its not worht sacrificing the content
Good drop

Climax -

I thought ur story was dope, no real flaws, some nice metaphors

I stand in the spotlights, surrounded by trigger Happy Feds
Covered in cross-hairs, and I aint talking Nappy Heads

Flow was nicer cus didnt have multis still but shorter lines still incorperating the creativity

Overall this was mos def close but ima have 2 give this to propain for a more enjoyable read

Respect to both

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Alright thanks Dizzee..

Thats 1-0 me. Uppin for more votes

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Voted For: {Propain}

Iight its like this:

{Propain}:

Really nice verse here fam. Really great emotion and imagery. You described it so well, I could see the story happening in my head, which is a major plus! Flow was fine, this would sound real nice on audio, but anyways, you did a really nice job on this topic man, I am really impressed.

Denied Truth:

This verse was not good at all. You lacked emotion and good story telling, because you kept switching what you were talking about, and your verse had no depth to it, so basically, it was just boring. Imagery wasn't that good, because at times it was hard to follow your story line. Flow was fine however, I'll give you that, but this verse was just weak.

Vote/ {Propain}

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Voted For: {Propain}

yo this was a pretty nice topical...ive seen better though....

but ima have to say pain on this one cus he got alot more deep into the topic and a lil more detailed

fav lines:

Come from the woods and into the Middle Of A Street
I aint playing but my lifes still Fiddiling With Heat

Run to a dead end with no place to go, is it the end of this Rat Race?
The same questions asked as guns load and Gats Blaze

I stand in the spotlights, surrounded by trigger Happy Feds
Covered in cross-hairs, and I aint talking Nappy Heads
^hah..really liked this..

and also pain had a way better flow than Truth..even though flow dont really matter in topicals im jus sayin..and he had better multies and truth some of ur shyt didnt even rhyme...

like

And It Seems I Got Da Odds Stacked, Variables Against Me..
Cuz America Dont Like Niggas and Damn Sho Dont Feel Women

but w/e...

v/ Propain

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Voted For: Denied Truth

Opionion- I was feelin D.T.'s drop more than propain. aint nuffin wrong with propains just that DT's felt like it had more dept to it. it was also creative. Thaz why i give it toDT's than Propain. DT's showed it from the eyes of many other people along with their timelines while Propain just showed it from one poin of view

Verdict- Both Mc's post were all on point and pretty much even In detail. Nuffing wrong with either post and it was pretty much even out. But im giving it to DT's for creativity with the time line and differnt respective

Winner= DT

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Wow...

Uppin for some fucking votes in this bitch

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Cmon people.....fucking vote you lazy muthafuckers.

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