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wat da hell...............people votin for you..........I outta seriously leave this site then.
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no you outta just quit rappin period.....this site aint one of those sites where we be like nah u need to work on this and u'll get better if u think u go hard and drop some wack ass shit den we just gonna bitch u....keep ya head up kid....and just quit rappin try hop-scotch or sumthin
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Voted For: Black Queen
Aiight lets see: BQ: there's nothing left for you to say, man you got the foolish shooks cause you suck at rhymes worser than vacuuming up dr. seuss's books ehh... ok..... 4/10 i'll have to try and settle down, im chasing you too quick unto your death you'se like a midget on treadmill with this battle, a little short-of-breath not bad, could have been harder.... 5/10 so you know I got most of yall roasted this gone be your last day dogg i'll smoke your ass so bad your bodybag was actually an ash-tray eh.............. 4/10 Overall, i can tell you half assed this shit, cuz I'm seen way better from you. You really weren't hittin' as hard. No wordplay or wit. Jus wasn't anything that made me go "oh!!" and shit. nah mean? But um... 13/30 Ok, Trini now: KT: Shit's conspicous that ur unhappy and face is bombarded with acne Postin ya pic,while hidin ya eyes&hair??? .................................................. ...or one whole side a ya face really!!!!!! nah, didn't even rhyme really.. 2/10 Readin ya verses,shows that not only ya face,but skills are a wreck &only thing this repuslive bitch is capable a stiffing up is her neck nice.... 6/10 So someone tell this loathsome hoe not to fuck around with an ace Cause her hideous ass dun lap to hearts, .................................................. ......even if she dismembered waists!!!!!! nah.. not hard hittin' 3/10 Not that great a verse, it was decent I guess. Your flow was ok, but try adding more wordplay and wit into your lines man. You gotta work on that. good try tho. 11/30 Overall, this was weak-ass battle. but BQ came a LITTLE better. So vote/BQ |
oh and RTF, if you don't vote will be removed.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197037 |
Voted For: Black Queen
K-TRINI Shit's conspicous that ur unhappy and face is bombarded with acne Postin ya pic,while hidin ya eyes&hair??? .................................................. ...or one whole side a ya face really!!!!!! ^^ATTEMPTED PERSONAL...NOT REALLY HITTIN 6/10 Readin ya verses,shows that not only ya face,but skills are a wreck &only thing this repuslive bitch is capable a stiffing up is her neck ^^PLAYED...PLAYED..5/10 So someone tell this loathsome hoe not to fuck around with an ace Cause her hideous ass dun lap to hearts, .................................................. ......even if she dismembered waists!!!!!! MOST CREATIVE BAR...7/10 BLACK QUEEN there's nothing left for you to say, man you got the foolish shooks cause you suck at rhymes worser than vacuuming up dr. seuss's books ^^YEH...KINDA PLAYED 5/10 i'll have to try and settle down, im chasing you too quick unto your death you'se like a midget on treadmill with this battle, a little short-of-breath BETTER BAR....6/10 so you know I got most of yall roasted this gone be your last day dogg i'll smoke your ass so bad your bodybag was actually an ash-tray ^^LOVIN THIS BAR 8.5/10.. OPENER FILLER BUT MAD CREATIVITY ON THE ASH TRAY BODY BAG AVERAGE BATTLE OVERALL....I GIVE IT TO BLACK QUEEN, TRINI WUD HAVE SNEAKED IT IF IT WASNT FOR BLACK QUEENS CLOSER.... |
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that you judicial so respectable i been tryna tell him but ill jus let him talk his shit :laugh: |
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lol i see how yo bitch ass finally shut up talkin shit lol
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Voted For: Black Queen
blackqueen: there's nothing left for you to say, man you got the foolish shooks cause you suck at rhymes worser than vacuuming up dr. seuss's books ^^^^YEAH U DID HALF ASS IT...DA PUNCHLINE WAS WEAK BUT UR RYHME SCHEME WAS GOOD i'll have to try and settle down, im chasing you too quick unto your death you'se like a midget on treadmill with this battle, a little short-of-breath ^^^^LOL...GOOD so you know I got most of yall roasted this gone be your last day dogg i'll smoke your ass so bad your bodybag was actually an ash-tray ^^^DECENT CLOSER...NOTHIN HARD... k-trini: Shit's conspicous that ur unhappy and face is bombarded with acne Postin ya pic,while hidin ya eyes&hair??? .................................................. ...or one whole side a ya face really!!!!!! ^^^^U STRETCHED DA SHIT OUT DIS BAR AND...ACNE & REALLY DONT RYHME Readin ya verses,shows that not only ya face,but skills are a wreck &only thing this repuslive bitch is capable a stiffing up is her neck ^^^I AINT GET IT FAM LOL....STIFFIN? So someone tell this loathsome hoe not to fuck around with an ace Cause her hideous ass dun lap to hearts, .................................................. ......even if she dismembered waists!!!!!! ^^^^LOL..I REMEMBER U SAID SOMTHIN ABOUT MY SPELLIN...WHAT DA FUCK IS "DUN"?...DO U MEAN "DONE" ANYWAY DIS BATTLE WAS WUN SIDED...CUZZ TRINI CAME WITH ABSOLUTEY NO HOTT LIENS...HE HAD PERSONALS BUT IF THEY DONT RYHME THERE NOTHIN....BLACK QUEEN CAME DECENT NOTHIN REALLY STOOD OUT BUT SHE AINT REALLY NEED IT LOOKIN AT TRINI'S VERSE RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL |
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