Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-01-05 at 01:00 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Black Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-01-05 12:31 AM.

ima half ass dis shit

there's nothing left for you to say, man you got the foolish shooks
cause you suck at rhymes worser than vacuuming up dr. seuss's books
i'll have to try and settle down, im chasing you too quick unto your death
you'se like a midget on treadmill with this battle, a little short-of-breath
so you know I got most of yall roasted this gone be your last day
dogg i'll smoke your ass so bad your bodybag was actually an ash-tray

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K-Trini has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-01-05 12:55 AM.

Shit's conspicous that ur unhappy and face is bombarded with acne
Postin ya pic,while hidin ya eyes&hair???
.................................................. ...or one whole side a ya face really!!!!!!
Readin ya verses,shows that not only ya face,but skills are a wreck
&only thing this repuslive bitch is capable a stiffing up is her neck
So someone tell this loathsome hoe not to fuck around with an ace
Cause her hideous ass dun lap to hearts,
.................................................. ......even if she dismembered waists!!!!!!


http://community.rapverse.com/attac...achmentid=10800
^^Black Queen hidin her eyes hair and one whole side of her face


Dun under stand the punches then dun vote........I added a color to the key words needed to understand in order to get the punch.

LMAO.>.......my goodness.........this is the easiest battle I ever been in!!!!!!

nO VACB,CREATIVITY,FLOW.....NUTIN IN UR VERSE.!!!!!!!!

LOL.......dun mistake my immaturing for whackness BQ..............U lost this so bad.

This was like Arnold in his days gon to rape Gandi.LOL........U suck Black Queen.I only been raping since April.Look at my verse to urs........damn this was eay.

VOTE muther fuckers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!

VOTE LAZY PEICE A SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

black queen...........up this too you fuckin bitch..........

uppin............................................. ..............

*ignores wat he say*
uppin kids so you can vote..

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Voted For: Black Queen

Black Queen... damn ya verse was hot! Yur opener could of been a little better... but damn! that closer that was sick... "smokin you like ash-tray" lines are played.. but you flipped it and made it really hot!... your punches were hard and not one of yur lines was bad

K-Trini... 2 of yur bars were stretched and ruined the flow to that bar... verse was still good but yur punches werent as hard... sorry just wasnt feelin ya verse

*No hate just honest opinion* *Please RTF*

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thx misk return dat favor wen i get a chance promise

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Trini, ya verse was whack...the personals are fake, an non-hittin even if they wasnt fake.

Black, you KILLED IT....Midget line was RAW, Do ya thing ma'

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Voted For: Black Queen

shouldnt really have to explain my self in this.....but i will cuz im bored

k-trini~~~ya shit didnt rhyme at all to b real wit cha....ya lines was a little stretched ya structure is all fucked..all those periods aren't needed...those could be replaced wit decent punches for real...

Black Queen~~simple verse but got the job done...nice creative lines in there with the midget and ash tray lines....opener could have been a lil better but it was decent

v=BQ