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Strange in America have to change my character or be denied
Rights so I adapt to rap and try to yap crap but got my brains fried Me and a sinister neighbor tried to administer flavor to our flowerbeds Had to hurdle oil to fertile the soil beside or drive way with shower heads The sun done damage to my hairs couldn’t manage my affairs the same After that |
yer ok lol. lets get sum feed on this.............
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uppin this........................................
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*I send lyrical spells,like a abyss of firey hells
I put slugs in u that come out as empty shells* ^^^I like that line...coo...^^^ The rest was str8...it unfolded nice...I see you tryin ta get lyrical. I think it couldve used a lil more multi's and edgier structure...but it was nice,Fam. Keep elevatin....nice drop! return favor,Thanx! |
thanx for the feed CS, appreciate it. uppin this shit.............
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